| Reviews for Duality |
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The Last Centurion 1 chapter 1 . 7/24 got to hit the breaks at smoking part im out |
Ricardo chapter 1 . 6/20 Quite tired of this story really isn’t getting anywhere aside from teenagers fucking around in pointless drama. Pretty OOC for Harry to sleep with daphne he doesn’t know her and with the threat of Voldy he could have been seduced and kidnapped or killed. I’d be pretty turned off by daphne saying she slept with smith and Malfoy who are both huge assholes one of them being a death eater. Also smoking is pretty unattractive and daphne came across as a easy girl and foolish. |
Guest chapter 23 . 1/16 If I hated someone as much as Harry hates Malfoy then I would never ever get in a relationship with a girl who has fucked him for both our sakes... It just makes my blood boil thinking about it and your nemesis can easily get a rise out of you because of it |
Guest chapter 23 . 1/2 This is getting ridiculous |
dbreezy93 chapter 1 . 12/14/2019 I think this story is incredible. Sad to see it abandoned. Hope all is well with you |
Luthien'sLight chapter 2 . 12/11/2019 “ all the possibilities surrounding Daphne Greengrass and her knickers.” Aight ima head out. |
Haphne Emeraldplains chapter 40 . 11/11/2019 Is this story abandoned? |
catemperor402 chapter 1 . 8/21/2019 I just read this entire story on ao3 and its absolutely awesome why someone as gifted as you are in writing more, not twisted, but rather prudeunfriendly romances and spy thriller mystery mixes coupled with your almost flawless grammar and enrupturing storytelling is selfconcious about posting something on fanfictionsites which teem with garbage you have to crawl through to find gems like this is beyond me im going to download everything you have now to keep me busy for a while so thank you very much for these wonderful pieces of unconvential art |
sthrobbins chapter 28 . 8/14/2019 Too slow. This group talks more and does less than Doubledumb's Order of the Soiled Doves. |
GreenAlien123 chapter 22 . 1/3/2019 Harry is so fucking annoying. It's a sad combination of jealousy, worry, distrust and incompetence. Daphne has the patience of a saint. |
Eagle-Eyes chapter 40 . 12/26/2018 Great story Keep writing as life allows |
Padhi chapter 23 . 12/14/2018 What a stupid writing and why harry will give a damn about this bitch daphne when she us clearly cheating on him and not sharing anything atleast write something realistic if u can't then don't write all this nonsense no self respecting person would want to be with a bitch like daphne you are an arsohol for writing such story |
Sage Nameless chapter 40 . 11/11/2018 Great story, can't wait for the update! |
CasperShot chapter 27 . 10/9/2018 Actually, Scopolamine (while acting like a "truth serum" in a small fashion, due to the highly suggestive state it puts you in) would probably best be considered the muggle equivalent of the imperius curse, rather than the basic truth serum. Because under its influence, not only could you be convinced to divulge your deepest darkest secrets, there have been some reported cases of people under its influence being forced to rob banks, murder their own families, etc |
CasperShot chapter 11 . 10/8/2018 Half blood- Having Two magical parents, and muggle close relatives I.E, Aunt, Uncle, Muggleborn- Having at least one Muggle parent, weather the other is magical or not makes no difference. pureblood- Two magical parentsMagical relatives, immediate or otherwise. |