nice job dude..

I liked your previous story,I mean the one you have wrote this sequel to..but I think you should have stick to the show's storyline..It's nice but that would have been awesome..I mean,imagine the chemistry of Damon and Ali with all the Originals,I can..Nevertheless I still like this..Good job..

I liked this story, it was a good ending, even if I enjoyed the sequel more but what can I say responsible and moral is not my style :)

From what I read I think you have a good writing skills, it's well written and runs smoothly so we don't feel like anything is rushed.

Thank you for taking the time to write and complete this story.

Nice start :)

Damon not thinking about sex wouldn't be Damon, after all he's sex on a stick ;)

its over :[

Love it!

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Aww! Cute! Loved it!

loved the story and it was a brilliant ending congrats...x

Great story! I really enjoyed reading it, however, the plot for me is going south. the whole 'being pregnant' thing is so twilight, and i think it's bringing the story down. Not that i don't love the story, which i do, but it is. I don't mean to be rude, because you are an incredible author! :)

Holy shit! 7 kids. I would die if I had that many kids. Damn that was very surprising, but really entertaining. The kids are so much like them. Those are some wild kids.

Awesome story I love it the kids are adorable please update your other story about Damon and Dani I love it :)

Congrats on finishing this story! It was fabulous!

Good, but now I'm depressed. :(

Ooooh noooo! She can't be dead what about Riley and Damon? Please update asap