Ty for all ur hard work! Very cute how hibari slid Tsuna's box near his heart.

YESSSSSSSSSSS

Sounds like fun. ;)

I'm so happy for you tsukun and great job at this but pls make a sequels of one shot about the other people in parallel world remembering tsukun again and pls don't ever let tsukun and his guardians get hurt or die again and I can't help but want to see their reactions to find out that they have doubles!

GAH! I just can't accept that someone than Tsuna got to being Giotto's true successor that is just no no! Giotto never unsealed the ring, other than for Tsuna and now some stranger took Tsuna's place. aaaaaahhhh!

I thought he only the soul. Why the heck is his body suddenly on top shape? Was there a timeskip wasn't aware of or had a few months already passed by with him conditioning his body up to form that I skipped?

I'll try to say this without outright insulting your story.

First things first; The plot is... okay. Sorta nice. A bit too fast paced and not detailed enough.
Second; The actions of the characters in this fic is hopelessly stupid and needlessly dramatic. Simply said, OOC. In this case, the bad sort.

And thus, I lost interest in this fic. Good luck with another reader maybe.

wait... so Tsuna is alive?

It's too sad okay! My heart has limit too! Too much sadness... but a amazing story

I'm glad there was a happy ending. Very nice story, loved it

ok i have to ask, whats up with the random kanji?!

I noticed that when you wrote the Hiragana for 'Nakamura' you used 'ま' which is 'ma' when it should be 'な' which is 'na'

Why give Kai HDMW? It is a unique style for the direct descendants of Primo Vongola ando Simon. With the exception of Basil because he is a student of Iemitsu.

Did you also write the prequel to this? I can't find it when I used the search for this site.

I can't find the story that your talking about, I've search it here but there is none. Are you sure it is here? The Prequel of this story?