| Reviews for Not Normal |
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   lschierer chapter 21 . 7/27 Harry is heir presumptive of the house of Blackhe can be displaced. |
| Freddie Rindklip chapter 10 . 7/26 Quite chatty - then why am I reading it right? Well, you are a good writer. |
| Godsgrace2212 chapter 9 . 7/25 Mary II (of William & Mary) was DAUGHTER of James II, not cousin. |
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/21 why not just kill dumbledoor? is he that much of a wimp. he let's people try to steal his house and money, make him a slave, leave him with abusive relatives, and tries to steal away his soul-bonds. I mean.. come on..he should grow a pair, walk into dumbledoors office and slit his throat. |
| Monster King chapter 64 . 7/22 Awesome loved the story very good |
| abhinavvemuri123 chapter 12 . 7/5 Oh my god will there be a story or plot? It's all history and explanations till now |
| love4HP chapter 64 . 6/20 Tried to read the story. I respect your right to write the story the way you want. But multiple wives, polygamy always always put me off. There's nothing romantic about it at all nor beautiful. True there can be love of many kinds and a person can have feelings for or seem to love different partners at same time. BUT... True love is only one. True romance, true feelings, true love can only be felt for only one. Every true love might have emotional attachment BUT, every emotional attachment or bond IS NOT LOVE! |
| pavook chapter 5 . 6/19 The time dilatation bubble is a bit wonky. This pocket universe is too far removed from the normal flow of time and having the one inside not really age the same way seems too much. I dislike the implications of such a device to exist, it would be exploited right away, indirectly crashing the food market. |
| BrightSkywalker chapter 7 . 6/15 I really love the mystery in your story... But the wall of text exposition is killing me... :( On to the next chapter though. |
| BrightSkywalker chapter 3 . 6/15 This is so intriguing! |
| BrightSkywalker chapter 2 . 6/15 Did Hermione not know that there were no roosters? Possessed-Ginny had killed them. |
| BrightSkywalker chapter 1 . 6/15 This is SO exciting! Some of my favorite stories are when Harry takes just a second longer to THINK about what it means to be Dobby. |
| lastgodofwar chapter 3 . 5/13 Okay I'm going to be as polite as possible because I've tried to read this story 3 times. Why because the story is cool sounding and the writing is top notch. Now the only and I mean ONLY critique. ITS TOO LONG WINDED. It takes almost an entire chapter just for Dobby to say "Hey i want to be your elf, also Dumbledore spies on everyone". Question this is Harry Potter fanfic who needed a reminder about who harry is in the first 6 paragraphs? Not me. Okay rant over listen its a good story but needs major fat trimming if i am ever going to get through it. Instead of an exciting story that keeps me reading it feels like a trek across the desert with no water. |
| Pteaset chapter 1 . 5/13 I like it |
| Borg chapter 12 . 4/26 Cannot stand anymore of this fan-suckoff garbage |
