That was wonderfully written, bravo!

Awwww! Such a pleasant, hopeful ending to a delightfully dark story. My favorite kind of progression!

I really enjoyed this story: both the torment in the first part and the angst/hurt/comfort in the second part. While I would certainly not be opposed to further exploring their recovery and a developing relationship, the story is certainly able to stand as it is, and it's been so long I don't see an update coming anyhow.

Once more, quite anjoyable and well-written. Keep up the good work.

-Tilea

Really good job on this one-shot though most of it was sad T.T... stupid Gant .

This was so amazing, yet so sad. I'd love to see another chapter with a "happy ending", maybe.

This was so sad... I had seriously been expecting Edgeworth to be the one that I would be entirely upset about this, but after hearing that this was not the first time Gant had done this to him... :( :( It made more sense for Phoenix to break done like this.

Urf... this is beautiful, so realistic and gripping. My heart was literally aching through most of this. The descriptions give such vivid images - for example; "His eyes opened wide in an unseeing glaze, looking somewhere passed Miles' shoulder." - and it's fantastic to read. On the subject of this possibly being the final chapter, I would be more than happy to read more, but at the same time, if you DID decide to leave it here, it's a perfect ending. (Very sweet x'3)

That was so deppressing but so good :D

Well, I guess you could say that this really isn't my kind of thing. But I can't help but just seriously want to know what will happen in the aftermath of this event...

This was well written, and the emotions and feelings (by far the most important elements in a story like this) come across easily. I look forward to seeing what happens next!