that was absolutely delightful. Fun read

That ... was beautiful.

That was amazing ! thanks :D

I can't stop laughing it's so funny. I love this one.

xD i always got the impression that Seph was a SUPER DIVA!

xD

I like it.

LOVE LOVE LOVE. GREAT STORY. I DIED LAUGHING.

Hahahahahahaha...
*gasp in air*'*snicker*
Nice. Very nice. Good job, Cloud! You have the attitude down!

LOVVED EETTTT!

Oh gosh, oh gosh, I could exactly, totally, COMPLETELY picture Seph in his shopping attire, looking like an effin Hollywood star, pushing shopping cart and being a douche-bag, cursing and well, being SEPHIROTH. Hmngggh I'm totally kissing the floor he walks upon.

And Cloud! I'm not THAT into piercing-loving Cloud, except for his ear, but well, WE NEED MORE CLOUD LIKE THAT don't you think? The cheerful one? Gosh. He is so very adorable. I'm running out of words to describe him...

Genesis? Tbh I don't really get his part... But weeeell, him being there is already... Good. Who wouldn't want Gen!

And omg now that Angeal and Zack no longer have an audience, CAN I TAKE THE VACANCY!?

That was awesome. You and SephCloud are miracles.

I love bitchy Cloud. You should write him like that more often

This was great.I loved the writing style and I
love Ethel and Eunice (which is saying something,I
generally hate OCs with a passion).
I feel like this when I have to shop at Costco
on 's so load and crowded and people
will not get the HELL out of my way.I usually
end up with the overwhelming urge to run people
down with my I completely agree with Seph.
It's nice seeing Cloud strut his stuff a little,doesn't
happen nearly often ,I love your stories,
please write more_.(hug).

Your style of writing, especially with personalities, makes me think of another awesome SephxCloud author by the name of sephcounttheways (if you check them out, I'd recommend their current work in progress, Blonde Ambition :)

As for this story...I died laughing and while I'm not sure who revived me, I'm happy they did so I could finish this! THIS was hilarious! I loved the part with the little girl and him yelling "What the fuck is a magical word?" And then proceeded to tell her, "I eat people three times your size for breakfast!"

And go Zangeal _ One of the least written pairings of FF7/Crisis Core but certain at the top of my list.

Great story, the sort of kick I needed to help revive my love of fanfiction again :)

Ethel and Eunice are back! They're so entertaining. I love bitchy!Cloud.

I am extremely proud of Cloud's bitchitude. :D

I laughed so freaking hard, when I read this! This one-shot is the SHITZ NITZ! (lol) I LOVE it! And you just write FREAKING AWESOME, Len! I heart you! ]] Ja ne and take care! xoxo Hmm, I think you should totally one day write a story where Cloud has the most BA Bitchittude EVER! Now, that I would favorite and enjoy so very much! *Chuckle*