Reviews for Naruto and his Uzumaki Heritage
666Neko chapter 13 . 3/1
great story thanks for sharing it with us readers wish there was more of it its just that good
Livyatan Kalmanrata chapter 13 . 2/23
Very nice very nice.
One question though, how did Extario "training doesn't matter" no last name power a wide-area seal of The Frictionless? Ephmereal Taking can be excused by knowledge being insubstantial, but The Frictionless? Wide enough that the slower-reacting genin would stumble from several feet away, assuming the distance.
Small nitpick with narrative order as well, as Might Guy: The Taijutsu Beast of the elemental nations would have made it if the seal was actually voice activated, and if it wasn't, Tenten wouldn't have made it out either.
Funny that Neji, the Hyuuga prodigy of the chakra based gentle fist, made no attempt to use chakra to help himself. Then again, water walking seems to be one of those essential survival skills the ninja education almost completely eschews.
Laxca chapter 13 . 8/30/2019
This was a gotdamn good fic. No complaints about any of it. I just wish you’d of written more, but I completely understand not writing more.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/19/2019
I would say that his father's expectations didn't influence him in a negative way, it's a positive goal that goes in the direction of self improvement.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/19/2019
Very nice perspective from Naruto's part. Slow and steady.
Kingkong101 chapter 3 . 4/22/2018
Naruto is weak
Jatok chapter 13 . 10/12/2017
This was great!
arsenicminds chapter 1 . 10/9/2017
okay. this was beautiful.
insanemaelstorm chapter 13 . 9/4/2017
Nice chapter. Really love how you have shown the power of seals and why uzumaki's are crazy. Really like how sasori and deidara got ideas about art. Like how the relationship between Naruto and tenten was developed. Like how he ended up 'asking' her to be his wife. Like how the broken seal master was shown. Can't wait to read more
lostxinxthexdarkness chapter 13 . 8/27/2017
I've LOVED reading this story so far! Please tell me that either you're just on a hiatus, that someone has adopted it, or that it's at the very least up for adoption?

I very, very, rarely use the word "love" to describe a story (far more rarely an unfinished one), but I can't describe my feelings towards this story any other way. I seldom find a story that is capable of capturing my attention, in the way that this story has. The slightly philosophical take on Fuin Jutsu, is a very welcomed change from the status quo of stories, especially considering that most times it's very rarely touched upon beyond the Kyuubi's sealing.

Keep up the great work, and if you have taken a break from fanfiction (just assuming from noticing the last update for this story), then know that your work has brought me great happiness in a not very happy time, and that I wish you the best in your life.

Have a great day!
Dichotomus chapter 12 . 8/5/2017
Best chapter ever, and you did it with an OC to boot. Most authors go to shit when the introduce an OC, but you are quite exceptional.
Dichotomus chapter 11 . 8/4/2017
fun chapter, I like how you brought y Jericho from earlier chapters back and made it integral to this one.
AkaneShiro chapter 9 . 7/7/2017
the end killed me... that was so sad
AkaneShiro chapter 6 . 7/6/2017
the end killed me lololol
Sefera chapter 13 . 7/1/2017
Interesting, I'm favoriting this just incase you ever continue it.
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