Love the story I hope to be more soon.

At first I didn’t realize who does Naruto wise. But after reading about the bat transformation. I realize you’re using the naruto from the story in the Naruto Official Fan book.

I like it

Please continue the story I enjoyed it

Inuyasha brought Naruto a shore?! I would love to see that! Heck, I wouldn't mind someone bringing me a shore!

Okay, gonna be blunt here. Barely made it five or so lines down past the "POV switch" before I dropped this. The characters are flat, completely unrelatable to the source material. They just feel like cardboard cutouts, really. "Inuyasha save him" sounds so boring and dead, it's almost criminal. The interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha just seems like it's there for the sake of being there, rather than conveying an actual conversation or interaction between two characters.

Then there's the whole 'one sentence per line' nonsense. Didn't even bother to try and add descriptions or actions. Just "he did this" followed by "this happened" and "she responded with this". It's boring.

Like... I'm sleep deprived right now and I'm bothering to write this "review" because it was that bad. Seriously, get a beta or something.

Why don't u let naruto keep the shikon jewel for the gang to prevent naraku from getting it. Nice story by the way.

um tiny problem. Kagome is not from 1500 years in the future she from nearly 500 years in the future. In fact she's from more like 450 years in the future as the part of the feudal period Inuyasha take place in is somewhere between 1543 to 1553.

Thats good story

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I have a question for this story are you keeping the pairings originally for all the characters like in the canon or are you changing them.

Cool chapter continue please.

Nice storie. Crappy writng

You underestimate Naruto's ability in using Swords it won't take him to master a Sword because as a Shinobi he is used to using Short swords and if that didn't get your attention he fought against two Kumo Shinobi when Pein destroyed the village the Kumo Shinobi are masters in using Swords, and he held them off with his Kunai.

I don't understand why you mentioned that Naruto is a Demon because he is the Jailor of Kurama not a Demon this is a big mistake in your part in assuming that he is a Demon.

I have one major question is Kagome paired up with Inuyasha or will he go with Naruto this is the biggest issue that I need addressed.

Miroku is a perv and I would end up hitting him a lot too. Also I am curious to see how this goes.