I know it's been a long time since you've probably acknowledged this book however I realy enjoyed this book and wanted to say thanks for the entertainment I guess, if you ever read this anyway (*・・*)

If you have no interest in doing anything with this story anymore, I WOULD LOVE TO ADOPT IT. 3 Just let me know, alright?

This is not meant to be a flame, dont view it as such im just trying to help point a few thingd out. In chapter 4 you said 'catched a cold' when really you would say 'caught a cold' because catched as far a I know is not a word.
To make the healing more realistic you could have said a few days had passed, those are the major things I noticed that were off but I would urge you to get a beta for your writing.
-RumCake

boner killer? Really?

I really love this it's so creative!

WHAT YOU MOTHER FUCKER! DON'T YOU FRIGGIN DARE ABANDON THIS STORY OR ILL TRACK YOU DOWN AND FORCE YOU TO WRITE IT! If you do not continue this story I will murder you very violently.
Yours sincerely,
Fred Weasley AKA Koneko-Livi

What is with France and his ohonohonohonohon thing anyway?

oh,no...
please finish this story i beg you, this story is very amusing to me...
if this story delete maybe i being stress out...

Please finish the story, it is a great story!

what? n-noooo

I love this story D:

Oh, that's too bad... This was one of my favorite stories.

I really think you should re-do it... Not because itms bad... Because it's so good! I'd love to read more!

Well, I can't wait to read more of your stories!

-Mikka

Please don't delete this story, I can't speak for myself, as I have discontinued 1 story, and my sister discontinueing another, but I know countless others hope you won't. Just discontinue it, I've seen more cliche stories than this. Anyway, I hope you do re-write it, and a few spelling mistakes can be forgiven as English isn't your native language, People who speak english as a first language with worse grammer. This is your story so do what you like with it, I just hope you continue it! x

I loved the sotry but I have to admit it was... kinda boring.. idk. Still liked it tho' ;D

:O NOOOO! Please don't delete it! This, by far, is one of the most entertaining stories I've read since FOREVER! Just have it discontinued, but rewrite it as another story, so people can still read this piece of awesome and the new-and-improved piece of awesome! I'll gladly wait forever and a day so it can be updated (and I bet everyone else would too), so don't worry about the time it takes.

I loved everything you've put in this story. I DEFFENETLY wouldn't take anything out of it AT ALL. I swear, this story is a piece of fine art, and I loooove looking at/reading it. LOL that's sounds awkward, but it's soooooo true!

Anyway, I'm going to say it flat out: I love this story. (As if you couldn't tell from those two paragraphs up there) but if you feel like you absolutly have to take it down, then do it. I mean, you're the author, so you are the ultimate ruler of this story. I'm just the fangirl who would foam at the mouth when she sees the update in her inbox (lol weird mental image :P).

Peace and biscuits,

~burple

Gilbert! Pretending he's in a 'relationship' with Alice :c

But I love this story! It's funny and I'm excited for Alice and Al to get together