Hey, I know that this review is clearly ages after your hiatus and all that, but I just wanted to let you know that I admire the way that you announced your hiatus and you knew what was best for you. It's a really admirable skill. Also, your writing is brilliant!

This be great

This is great

Such a cool story!

Hi there ! Obviously this is abandoned ! But I hope you are alright!

really liked the story even if it wasnt completed :)

Oh, I hope your okay. Your a really great author, I love your stories. Good luck, hope everything is fine, and well done :)

Oh, it's okay!
I don't know what's going on in your life, whether you've fixed it by now or not, but I hope you have.
Good luck!

Magnus Bane without colour is like music without headphones. Just sayin'.

I'm loving vulnerable Magnus waaaay too much.

Ooh, I love art Alec! There are so little of that out there, and it also helps with Alec and Clary's friendship, which I love...!

Meh. This is OK, maybe try to be less ALEC MY LOVE OMG HE IS A PERFECT ANGEL AND CAN DO NOTHING WRONG, also lessen up on the angst. However promising start I suppose

this was beautifully heartbreaking

Hey, so I would just like to know did you write more than 17 chapters because I really like the story and I didn't found them anywhere else and I would like to keep on reading. So if you do please tell I'd be more than pleased to read them! c:

Who are you? Are you all right?

I came to the end of this fanfic having my entire focus completely absorbed by the story- yet being cut so abruptly like that made those questions pop into my mind. I still can't settle with the idea I'll maybe die someday and never now what happened with your Magnus and Alec. But then how it ended just tore me out of the story and shifted my focus. Who is the person that being young to be in school still wrote this so wreckingly well? Who that not even being a native speaker wrote better than most? It just keeps nagging me, who was the one that was stressed out but managed to deliver this amazing work-work that dealt so well with difficult issues, dark issues as abuse and emotional scarring- And then it keeps on nagging me, why would there exist a world were someone writing so well was stripped from its right to keep on writing? I... dont know you... But I do realize it's been years since you last updated and I only hope you turned out ok. I hope, in truth, you managed to stay happy because someone that writes as you, someone that is so greatly talented that I'm reminded of your own Alec, the artist, with a talent unique... You are an artist on your own right and deserve to be well and happy. And you deserve to know you were amazing before it all ended.
I wish strongly, with all my yearn, like everyone here, that one day you finish this. I just need to know what happens- there was no conflict resolution and so the conflict of your characters nesttled in my heat...
But I know it is difficult to ask this of you, to update. So I just wish you are ok, with all my heart. Please don't ever forget you are a talented writer and you have moved me and many on your fandom and that takes something special. Don't ever forget that.

Such a beautiful story I love it