I'm just curious, do you actually have a fetish or something? Well, it is good that you did not cross the line.

Damn...that was beautiful...very dark. You definitely have a talent, and you captured Hazama spot-on. literally, I couldn't find anything out of place.

I've always felt like they would make an intriguing couple. You basically brought that to life in so few words, and your descriptive writing, left me breathless.

From one author to another, keep writing, more of this stuff if you wish ;-) but you have talent.

And great concept by the way (with the tallies on the wall).

- Rae

Y'know...browsing through the Hazama M rated fics on here...has made me discover that yours is by far the best one I've read!

Hazama and Tsubaki were both amazingly well-written; so well-written it's...kind of scary, actually.. o_0 ...Moving right along...

I have to admit; I'm not much of a fan of the whole 'submission' thing, mainly because I don't think people pull off the idea well, but you; your fic, and just the fact that it's Hazama fucking around with people's emotions... I really like this fic!

Anyway, good work! I really enjoyed reading this!

~Fallen Maiden Of The Boundary~

Great little one-shot here, though the ending felt slightly tacked on. You do a beautiful job capturing both Hazama's sadism and Tsubaki's despair. It's not shocking in the least to see Hazama use sex as yet another method messing with people's minds.