I was convinced during the K2 scene that it was Kenny.

hmm...I enjoyed it

how would that even work? Maybe I should take Human Annatomy in school?

Well...Damn, Kyle is the most sane? Well...I suppose it makes since. Kyle comes from the least horrifying home.

I like this story. Good writing, and you really captured Kyle's emotions.

0.0 This is a perfect example of the (phrase?) 'Hauntingly beautiful'. It was amazing, well written, and although the story was about bad things, I couldn't find it in me to leave this story: I had to finish it. Your an amazing writer. xx

Poor Kyle.

In all truth, this whole story scares me. What scares me even more, is that I like the story despite its dark tone. It amazes me how you write, your technique per say, that always gets me to enjoy what you write. Although,I think this is the first story to effect me enough to get me to even ponder about giving a response.

Keep on writeing, okay?!

This story was brutal. It was very well written, you feel like you are falling into the insanity these four friends seem to share. Very dark and disturbing, which I seem to have a thing for. I really liked this story, especially the end, where it turns out that Kyle may actually be the most insane of them all. You really feel for him, being victimized by the people he should be able to trust the most. Brilliant writing overall

Wow! I'll get my constructive criticism out of the way first so that I can go about praising you as you deserve. I'll be honest - I'm not a fan of Kyle being raped. I personally believe that he's a stronger character who wouldn't just take that type of thing. That being said, the way you wrote this was very well-done. Everyone is so dark and twisted and it makes a heck of a lot of sense character-wise. Kyle's descent into madness/sort-of consent was excellent. I want to run off right now to read the follow-up to this that you also wrote, so goodbye for now. Keep up the fine work.

ohh cool it is nearly a threesome :)

Pretty cool, man.

Nnngh terribly enough, I really wish you'd write more of this. I actually thought Cartman seemed the most sane of the bunch ... he was very in character though, imo.

I want to see what happens when Stan finds out... #*_*#

Holy # $# that's hot. I love Kyle's little analysis of his friends at the beginning, too.

God, I enjoyed this story way to much. Something about insanity, rape, abuse etc just draws me in and makes me feel...something. I enjoy humor and fluff but a good story with dark themes every now and again is delicous~

I actually thought Cartman was the most insane, and maybe Stan. I expected Kyle to either:

A. Kill himself

B. Fall in love with one of them

or

C. Call the police on them

This ending suprised me! Kyle being the most insane…I wouldn't have guessed it. This story was so, erm, INSANE! and dark, of course. Keep up the good work!

This fic is ..Kudos to you, you have brought back my hallucination(who's totally out of control). And recently I've discovered this bipolar disorder's been bothering me. Some sort of multiple personality...