what about mary-lynnette you completely left her out so just as an idea you can put her on theirry's team and she could figure out who Ash really is or somtin

Wow... This chapter was a great continuim! Well done! Nice little silliness and all! Love the story!

I love this! And I demand an update soon -.-

PLEASE don't let anybody die in the heist! And Rashel and Quinn are NOT getting caught. Like it or not.

Anyways get writing girl. It's my first day back at school and I'll need something to cheer me up :P

Tina x

oooh ash almost put his foot in his mouth, would have been good to see quinn punch him though

lol at the boxers

lol at morgead banta love it:D

cant wait for the next xx

lol that was soo sweet:)

awsum:)

this chap was great love it :D

awsum start like wow love it:)

Man, I wish Ash had continued that sentence. It would have been fun to see Ash's face get punched in by Quinn! (:

Awesome chappie! Ahah, poor Rashel! Having to wear a dress. James's clothes are just the best out of all of them! (: And Ash is such an IDIOT. Just, wow. And aww, James wants to meet the mysterious Poppy... (:

Update soon! Can't wait to read more. (:

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

I TOTALLY WANNA READ MORE YO.

o_e"

Hm. If Ash continued his sentence about Rashel and the dress, I'm sure Quinn would have, himself, broken his nose. Ahahaha. Anyways.

I just love how this chapter flowed. It enveloped pure manner in profession, and the under-hinged excitement for the mission was greatly showed.

Ahh! I love it. I love youuu! (Not in homo way. XD)

Ahh. Quinn...I have a feeling he won't be able to concetrate. Haha. And no disappointment...rather, ''agh, why'd you stop there?'' Lol.

And yesss...your ex-husband shall wear THE hat, live, suicide, and his hat shall return to its maker. XD

Yes. *is still writing*

Update soon. :D

Hahaha I love this! Unique and wonderful! Quinn and Rashel were so sweet! Hope you make Jez and Morgead meet. That would be awesome. Update soon! :)

YAAAAAAAAAAAY! You updated. (:

Yeeeeah, Quinn and Rashel are finally together! Dude, it's time for Keller and Galen. Seriously. (: I'll do the video games as soon as you do Keller and Galen. Yeah, blackmail right there.

OMG, I totally recognized that Inception quote. When he's explaining the dreams, right? I loved that movie... (:

Great chappie, happy that QxR finally got together. Quinn was acting a bit stupid in this chappie. (: Update soon!

Ah! This chapter was brilliant. You never cease to amaze me.

The way you've captured Quinn's attraction to Rashel is pure sense, as in the situation. You didn't write paragraphs of description-and you didn't need to. You have a way to penetrate whatever emotion or action strongly, without much effort. I could FEEL the heated tension as Quinn confessed his feelings-felt his mental pull towards Rashel in frustrated, wanting matter, and sensed the blossomed relieved pleasure when they kissed.

Short chapter, but my favourite so far. :)

Well done. It was flawless, and I love it.

And yes-I am satisfied. More than that. And yes, I WAS smiling! :D And laughed when I read that you were positive I would be.

HIS hat shall live and conquer the sea- there will be one whole chapter of a gray fedora washing up-unharmed-on shore, and a fourteen year old teen finding it.

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Haha. But fantastic chapter. Keep up the good work and update as soon as possible! :)

Oh, James is already interested with the mysterious Poppet. XD Hey, add James's gray fedora hat here too. It would be hilarious.

And no problemo. It's way worth it.

I love it! But when do I don't?

Amazing chapter.