And here I go again ..enjoying another great mob fic ...have fun stay safe

Omg this is the first time I have ever seen anyone update closer to the actual year because u said 2020 at the beginning. I just started to read but I can all ready tell this is going to be amazing.

OVER DRIFTING FOR GODS SAKE HOW STUPID IS EDWARD WHAT IS HAPPENING!

His last thought "HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO WOO HER NOW?" XD THat is hilarious and YES bella is BADASS! Edward is so cute around Bella.

Yes! Yes! Yes! This is so good and Edward is so possessive! I love the bromance going on its the literal best. Imagine some guy being as obsessed as Edward is with Bella but with you. Im swooning!

Aw poor Bella she thought... Oh man now I want me some icecream. I love how she named her car Hermie. Speaking of which is the reason Bella got into writting the reason you did? I really enjoyed reading this chapter and Bella roomie sounds adorbs

Ooooo cliffhanger. I think this Mafia Edward is growing on me. And the way you described Bella now Im jealous. Honestly I really wanna be in a car race it sound thrilling.

Omg I love the attention to detail how descriptive you were!
Mafia that is such a cool way to look at the Cullens I Love IT!

Hey, thank you for sharing this story. When I first read the summary, I was really intrigued. I started reading, and I think the story is a good one for an easy quick read. I have to say, though, that there are some spelling errors and incorrect words, but nothing that can't be fixed by a Beta reader.
In the beginning, the plot was interesting enough to keep me reading. But then when we hit the middle of the story, I was dragging through the story a bit. There were quite a few characters that could be interesting, and then they just never appear. Especially Charlie Swan. Even when Bella woke up from her coma, she was wondering about her father, but we never really get the answer to that.
I have to say, I really hoped that we could get to know the main characters better. Other than Bella and Edward, I feel like we don't really see the others enough to really get attached to them or understand them.
All in all, this story has a lot of potentials IF you ever want to come back and expand it or add to it. But at this point, this story is a good one and it's enjoyable, a story that's easy to read.
Best of luck in your future writings,

Ava

I love your little story and don't stop writing.

The Cullen man are tough.

Oh Alice missing I hope she ok.

Freaking awesome chapter.

I like this chapter and I love it .

I'm fear for Edward life.