God, this fic is gorgeous. I just can't explain why it isn't more famous! I actually red it more than 6 month ago, but still I think about it. Often. And this is the reason why I decided to leave a review. I think that the dreamlike atmosphere you created is amazing, really amazing. It's still vivid in my mind despite I hadn't reread your fic in such a long time. Great. Infinite kudos to you.

Fantastic!~

This is fantastic. I loved it.

Lo único que puedo decir después de leer este fic es...Fantástico!
Me encantó! Amé la forma en que expusiste claramente las diferentes personalidades de nuestros queridos Shizuo y Izaya y como fue progresando su amor.
Estaré muy ansiosa por seguir leyendo mas de tus historias.
Ps: lo siento por comentar pero realmente apesto escribiendo en inglés y soy muy perezosa como para buscar palabra por palabra en un traductor XD.

That was... really deep. I'm not sure if the purpose of this story was to blow the minds of the reader, but it certainly blew mine. The psychological notions and the intensity of, well, everything really... it made this story sensational. I just wanted to write this long-ish review to thank you for writing something so profound. I think this story just made my day C:

Does this story possibly have anything to do with the Shizaya MAD [Order Made] ? Because the tears part and the creation of a perfect human being not to mention my prediction from the MAD that Shizuo and Izaya had met before due to the last line of the song "Have we met somewhere before?" When I watched it, I sort of wondered if it meant that Izaya was a god and Shizuo died in his past life or a parallel universe but Izaya offered Shizuo everything to be a perfect human being because maybe they loved each other in the past. In a way, I thought Izaya favoured Shizuo. I'm not sure since I only read the first chapter and some of the second chapter.

oh my god i loved it i can't believe i have not heard of this fanfic until today it was amazing!

This is so Good! I love this story! Good Job!

Oh. My. Glob.
I fell in love with this from the very beginning c:
My Daily Dose of adorable Shizaya has been quenched. Thanks

I have to say, the psychological, philosophical, and sociological aspects, as well as the analysis of love and humanity are very nicely put together. I have to say though, I feel like that sequences from Peter Pan. You said in the beginning that we were supposed to take what we saw out of it, but like how Roppi said, I take it as a child. Why? Because it is no less beautiful. It is no less exciting. It is no less thrilling to be taken as it is said. I could pin it as some analytically study of your mind as well as mine and start picking apart life in general, but why when I can see this journey, and with the simplicity and wisdom of a child still understand what is most important. Glorious work. The ending was not definitive as one would say, but unlike all other open-ended books, I was satisfied. In all honesty, I could never see this having a "The End" attached. The story itself is about existence without end. While you are an old man, there are you as children. While you are dying, there is you being born. While you may not have noticed the symbolism of that whilst writing, it is still brimming with emotional impact. There will never be an "end". This story gets my deepest thank you. Thank you for writing this. Thank you.

THIS. IS PERFECT.

omg This story was soooo amazing! I'm surprised it doesn't have way more reviews! I will admit I was expecting/hoping it to be a tad bit longer, but you ended it in a way, that it wasn't disappointing or rushed. This story had a very unique plot and progressed in a way, that It always surprised me what happened next. Although there was one thing I was confused about (along with one or two other things, but I can't remember those atm)

-Why did Shizuo and Izaya split away from Shinra and the others/why didn't they come back?

Okay, gotta say I just LOVE how you ended this chapter. ;D Also the shizayaness was sexy 3

omg This story is so good and I've only read two chapters! I don't know where it's going, but it's so cool! I love all the talk of different universes and the philosophical effects. :D You've got me hooked!

Woah, I have a friend who suggested this fic to me a long while back and I'm just getting around to reading it. So far it's... really creative :D It seems really interesting and I'll definitely read more.