This was actually a bit cringe. Hot, though. I applaud you for having most of the Japanese right, but it's really weird to see it in romaji. Idk, i think it would have been better if you had it in kana. with romaji just with Lelouch. thanks for writing!

Estos son los que me hacen reír y que suzaku es feliz y adoro que Lelouch no pueda contra suzaku y acceda . Estos son bonitos

I really love stories where Suzaku is so sexually attractive to Lelouch, he'll sex him up and Lelouch would be like a butter in his hot pan. Please make a sequel for this story! Thank you!

I understood most of the Japanese (thank you countless anime series and college classes). More importantly: Lelouch is so lucky. I mean, please, let me fail a class so I can have Suzaku with me ;o; and I had a feeling he really knew what Lulu was saying; Suzaku, you trickster xD and I really like that even though Lelouch slammed the door in his face, Suzaku entered so calmly :')

Tldr: this and you are so brilliant. I will treasure this 3

I love the part where Shirley was like "Lelouch…"

"Hmm?"

"I don't mean to pry, but…"

"What is it, Shirley?"

Shirley avoided his eyes, fixing her gaze on his shoulder. "Urm… Suzaku's kind of been groping you for the past few minutes."

Lelouch looked over at Suzaku, standing just slightly behind him and off to the side. Then he looked down at Suzaku's hand, cupping and kneading his buttocks. "Oh, that." He shrugged. "Cultural thing. He's Japanese, you know."
I almost died laughing at this part. Great job. Loved every second of the story. You are one awesome writer.

Oh, absolutely delicious! Ands remembers, don'ts apologizies fors somethings yous enjoyed!

I love how Suzaku pretended that he couldn't understand English. Poor Suzaku. Some of the things that Lelouch said was mean. I love how Suzaku taught Lelouch some Japanese at the end. Suzaku and Lelouch are so cute together.

I loved this story so much!

Hoo boy… um… I don't know what it is about this fic that I really like, despite the fact that it makes me REALLY uncomfortable. I guess, since we see it from Lelouch's perspective the dub-con (can it really be called that when Lelouch repeatedly says 'Stop it' or thinks he is? The Gino!fic was kind of dub-conny, if only because we never hear a definite 'no' from Lelouch - just a lot of confusion as to what's going on. THIS… this seems to be pretty solid red flag territory) is at least not… traumatic, I guess? In that Lelouch does get over it very quickly in a very tsundere kind of way - more angry at the principle that Suzaku was just screwing around than being really violated… I dunno… it's one of those personal line things again and this really stepped on it…
And I still really like this fic - a tiny bit because the smut is still fairly creative and enjoyable… but also the premise is so silly overall that it never feels dark or threatening. And there are plenty of funny lines that make me laugh (where DOES the 'z' come from on Rivalz' name, anyway?) I guess I'll just call this one a big, fat, guilty pleasure.

Nice! Suzaku sure took revenge for Lelouch calling him a moron lol. Nice one shot :)

I don't usually do this, but this is a quick reply to saphire lilies's comment just to clear up some details:

"Skeitas" isn't a Japanese word, and breaks several romaji rules. "Suki da" can mean, in some contexts, "I love you".
"Yameida"... I think the verb you're trying to conjugate here is "yameru"? "Yameru na" is the imperitive form of "to stop" and "yamenda" can mean "don't stop". I'm not sure which one you meant there.

Just to clarify, just in case anyone stumbled across this. :)

You couldve said Skeitas (i love you) and Yameida (means stop it)

Sugoi! Kawaii! The japanese effect was sooo *squeal*! Aishiteru!
- Jade

Woah. I'm actually... Surprised at this.
- Jason

So sexy. :P
- Jade

Gambatte kudasai...
- Jason

You seem to be developing a trend of writing the unexpected. I can respect that. Especially when it's as funny as that and has translations in the end.

Playfully sweet, humorous, and awfully sexy!

This induced so many grins and butterflies in my stomach! Everything was great! Of course, I wouldn't know about the Japanese since I don't speak the wonderful language (though I wish I did..) but, aside from that, everything was great! I seriously can't find any more words to describe this since there just isn't any words to describe! It seems that all the other words that come to mind are too lacking and won't do this any justice.

Just know that this was worth reading. All of ten times xD

Kawaii-nee! Suzaku-kun is so freaking AWESOME! He's just do lovable and makes Lelouch learn who's boss! :3 I love tht he teaches Lelouch a little bit of Japanese in the end C: I'm really really hoping for a sequel! If it's not too much trouble!