Why this story has me crying my heart out! I love it so much! Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece of work!

Also... I read Entwined first, and then Entangled, I’m actually really glad I accidentally did it in that order! Really gave more weight to the entwined story without having the entangled bias? I’m not sure if that makes sense. But I LOVE both!

I LOVE that as a redemption ending! It made me not hate you for the first ending heehee fantastic story! Couldn’t stop reading!

Ok, so, as much as I loved this story, there was a lot that nagged me. Leah's constant nastiness toward bella when Jacob was the one who owed her loyalty and broke IMPORTANT promises he made to her was irritating. I don't know why leah centric stories always make leah so petty toward bella, as if it makes her look badass or sassy, when it in fact is very immature. I mean come on, she has a whole child with edward and she's throwing her relationship with him in bella's face like this is high school. And the fact that Jacob had the audacity to be mad at bella's (admittedly creepy) fanfiction when he literally tried to cheat on her twice and the only reason he didn't is because leah wasn't entertaining him is ludicrous. He had EVERY right to be upset that she would even THINK to publish his tribe's stories but other than that, he was a huge ass hypocrite. Also, Charlie going around bella and sending that manuscript to a woman who he KNOWS hates his daughter.. .what did he think would be accomplished when leah found that? Why not be a father and tell his daughter upfront about why he felt what she was doing was wrong? He violated her privacy and her trust, and probably never admitted to it. I was upset that Jacob was killed, even though I strongly disliked him in this, because it felt like there was so much potential for growth between him, leah, bella, and everyone else that just never happened. But I liked that in the end the balance was more of a concept than a rule, meaning that leah and the rest of the world would not suddenly fall apart just because Jake was gone. I really wish there had been more interaction between bella and Edward, and by interaction I mean i really was hoping bella would tear into his ass, because he surely deserved it. He did right by his son as best he could, but he wronged bella badly and that was kinda glossed over in my opinion. Bella is Edward's mate, and his betrayal deserves as much empathy and criticism as jake got for abandoning leah. I also wish bella had enough of a backbone to call Jake out on his hypocrisy, since he was mad at her story but also was fully prepared to leave her high and dry the DAY they left forks together should leah decide she wanted him.

This was suchhhh a crazy ride! And this epilogue was even crazier! Thank you for this story I loved it!

OMG this is so sad!

You have to continue. You created a legitimate world. I may be really butthurt about Jacob but the final 2 chapters made up for it. you have too good of a story and concept on your hands to let it drift in the wind.

I like to think of myself as one of your biggest fans;
I know you probably get that a lot but I’ve been following this story since it started. It’s been my favorite literally.
It’s so hard to find really great fics about leah and Jacob And I felt real heartbreak and joy while reading this fic. I was sad to know it was coming to an end but then I saw entangled was started and I felt hope; Hope that this love for this story didn’t have to end. Now that I’ve finally had time to catch up: I’m shocked your leaving leah and Jacob this way and I truly need you to write more (as pathetic as that is) you see I thought entangled would be a sequel not a AU. You see I am team Leah and Jacob and so I want this, what you wrote hear to, continue. bc I’m your biggest fan I am moving on to read entangled Because I know the joy of experiencing your work (the week with August and Edward prompted me to think there should be more there too between leah and Edward bc I never saw much of the progression of their obviously intimate relationship)
I hope this never comes off critical/ this isn’t a flame
Just disappointment that comes with seeing the end of something great. you’re amazing and I just wanna see leah and Jacob struggle thru the pickle of his reincarnation.
Is that something you plan on exploring ? Consider it please for me, a small fan in the grand scheme of things
Love always ree

Oh god... the blubbering mess i was in ch. 36. When i thought it was under control, here you come with Leah giving birth and Jake not being at her side and the damn just broke again. Ow my heart! This story has been a pleasure to read and excellently written. I want my Leah to have her happily ever after so bad. Hope baby Jake can do so. I would love to see that story unfolded.

I didn’t know you finished this! Loved it! It was beautifully written! And I loved the reincarnation of Jake. That was perfect.

This story has grabbed me by my edges and dragged me through 37 chapters of wild emotion... I loved it! Now onto Entwined lol

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I've loved this story!

Awesome.

i really thought she'd get back with edward eventually. no matter whom you choose to have her end up with, you can't leave her story unfinished. it begs to be told. i'll be waiting patiently