Reviews for Percy's Hell
Guest chapter 5 . 7/5
OMG. I am so sorry for your brother. Yes. Definetely he was a true hero. He died protecting the country. May the god bless him.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/3/2019
Plez make it longer.
TaTianna Daughter Of Poseidon chapter 5 . 2/21/2018
Omg I'm so sorry for correcting chapter three I didn't know so so so so so so sorry for your loss
TaTianna Daughter Of Poseidon chapter 2 . 2/21/2018
Percy has the curse of Achilles sooo that means he can't get injured except in the small part of his back where he chose to be his "Achilles heel" sorry just had to point it out you even said he has the curse sorry to be the corrector but
awesome chapter 2 . 9/29/2017
sorry your brother died but please write more
Ohio chapter 4 . 9/28/2017
Add more now
Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2017
Great, a fanfic where Percy's ass is getting kissed because he's loved unconditionally and just the very best there ever was. Bye, I'm out.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/13/2017
Sorry brom
Howl365 chapter 5 . 6/13/2017
I am truly sorry for your brother. I hope you are doing well. Stay safe
MelodySongGirl chapter 3 . 4/20/2017
This is super good!
Absters1andonly chapter 5 . 12/29/2016
PEOPLE, THE AUTHOR DIED! DO YOU EVEN CARE? I CAN'T BELIEVE PEOPLE ARE ASKING WHEN THE NEXT UPDATE BE? GAVE YOU NO HEART? GOD!
SAYA chapter 1 . 8/15/2016
i HAVE TEARS IN MY EYES but a smile on my face... a clenching in my chest with a glint in my eyes... I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M FEELING ANYMORE!
Ms Marshmallow-chan chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
u should continue...I am loving it
greekguy15 chapter 5 . 3/13/2016
I'm so sorry! I would love to pick up the story, and here is my story so far:
The Quest Happens!

Disclaimer:I don’t own any of the characters except Braxton(that's me!).

Chapter 1

Percy's POV:

Annabeth and I skid around the corner, bumping into someone. “Watch it!” he said, and as he turned to Riptide, his eyes grew wide. “Whoa, don’t kill me!” he yelled, backing away from us. He can see through the Mist? I thought, How? Luckily Annabeth stood up for me, “ It’s a pen.” she said. “It’s obviously a sword.” The stranger said.
I spoke up, “What's your name?” I asked. “If you put down the sword, I’ll answer.”He said “Wait a sec.” I told him.

I sliced the remaining gorgons in half and changed Riptide into a pen form. He took a deep breath. “ My name is Braxton Johnson, and yours?” “Percy and Annabeth,” Annabeth said. “are you … I don’t know… going to a camp tomorrow or some time in the future?” “Yeah! How did you know?” He took a glimpse over my shoulder. “Snake-haired ladies alert!” “Get in the cab!” I said. we sped off.

Braxton’s POV:

Trust me, I was not all for getting in a cab with a couple strangers but I was not going to turn into snake food either. “Read this book out loud.” Annabeth said “Okay. Η μεγαλύτερη όλων των ηρώων της ελληνικής μυθολογίας , τον Ηρακλή ήταν ο ισχυρότερος άνθρωπος στη γη . Εκτός από την τεράστια σωματική δύναμη , είχε … WHAT IS THIS!?” “It’s Greek. Translate that.” Annabeth ordered. “The greatest of all heroes in Greek mythology, Hercules was the strongest man on earth. Besides tremendous physical strength, he had … Whoa that's so cool!” The cab screeched to a stop. “Michelle, Kathleen get in the cab!” They hopped in. “WHAT’S GOING ON, AND WHY DOES SHE HAVE A KNIFE!” Kathleen yelped.

“To protect myself. We need to tell you something. This is the prophecy of seven.
Seven half bloods shall answer the call,
To storm or fire, the world must fall,
An oath to keep with a final breath,
Foes bear arms to the Doors of Death.
How many more are there of you?”she asked. I suddenly got a splitting headache. “That prophecy… I… I’ve heard it somewhere… Leo Valdez son of Hephaestus , Hazel Levesque daughter of Pluto , Frank Zhang son of Mars, Percy Jackson son of Poseidon, Annabeth Chase daughter of Athena, Piper McLean daughter of Aphrodite , and Jason Grace son of Jupiter.

Lightning Thief.
You shall go west, and face the god who has turned,
You shall find what was stolen, and see it safely returned.
You shall be betrayed by one who calls you a friend,
And you shall fail to save what matters most, in the end.

Sea of monsters.
You shall sail the iron ship with warriors of bone,
You shall find what you seek and make it your own.
But despair for your life entombed within stone,
And fail without friends, to fly home alone.

The Titan's Curse.
Five shall go west to the goddess in chains,
One shall be lost in the land without rain,
The bane of Olympus shows the trail,
Campers and Hunters combined prevail,
The Titan's curse must one withstand,
And one shall perish by a parent's hand.

The Battle of the Labyrinth

You shall delve in the darkness of the endless maze,
The dead, the traitor, and the lost one raise.
You shall rise or fall by the ghost king's hand,
The Child of Athena's final stand.
Destroy with a hero's final breath,
And lose a love to worse than death.

The Last Olympian

A Half-Blood of the eldest gods,
Shall reach sixteen against all odds
And see the world in endless sleep
The hero's soul, cursed blade shall reap
A single choice shall end his days
Olympus to preserve or raze.”
Then I blacked out.
Kathleen’s POV:

When Braxton came to, it was time for the campfire. “Do you remember anything?” I asked. “No.” He said. He chose a Trident that turned into a keychain. People were shouting. Suddenly everybody gasped. “Did I do something wrong?” He said. There was a faint glow above him with a picture of a Trident. Chiron, the camp counselor, kneeled before us. Everyone followed his lead. “All hail Braxton, son of Poseidon,” “All hail Michelle,daughter of Hades,”Some kid, everyone called Nico, gave her a strange look, “Carly and Gillian, daughters of Aphrodite, Kathleen, daughter of Zeus, and Josh, son of Hermes.” After s’mores, we sang songs. Percy stood up, “I nominate Braxton for a song.” then he sat down.

Braxton’s POV:

When Percy said that, I smiled. I don't know why that guy seemed so nice to me. “Well, if he's okay with it, sure.” Everyone turned to me. “Sure.” I said. They cheered and carried me up to the stage. I grabbed the microphone and said, “This goes to everyone who accepted me.”

“In this world, where all alone, you know I love my island home!
Well make this right, find a way through this mystery!
I just wanna be swimming in the sea
now it's just you and me!
Forever, ever, ever
I just wanna be with you living free!
It's my destiny!
Forever, ever, ever
I just wanna be swimming in the sea
like it’s just you and me
forever, ever, ever!
I just wanna be with you living free!
It's my destiny
Forever, ever, ever!
In this world where all alone, you know I love my island home!
Well make this right, find a way through this mystery!
I just wanna be swimming in the sea
Like it’s just you and me
Forever, ever, ever!
I just wanna be with you living free!
It's my destiny
forever, ever, ever!
I just wanna be swimming in the sea
Like it’s just you and me
Forever, ever, ever!
I just wanna be with you living free!
It's my destiny
forever, ever, ever!
In this world, where all alone, you know I love my island home!
Well make this right, find a way through this mystery!
I just wanna be swimming in the sea
Like it’s just you and me
Forever, ever, ever!
I just wanna be with you living free!
It's my destiny,
forever, ever, ever!
Together, whenever, together,
lyin’ in the sun
Together, whenever, together
it’ll just you and me
Forever, ever, ever!
I just wanna be!”

I took a deep breath. Suddenly clapping started roaring in my ears. Then it stopped as a girl started singing “ would you come with me
well swim the deep blue sea
aaaaaahhh, aaaaaaaaahhhhh, aah-”
Braxton’s POV:

“STOP!” I said “Why aren't you falling under my control?” she asked. I noticed all the boys except Percy was on her side “I’m a son of Poseidon, that's a sailor enchantment song, so I can withstand it.” “Hmph!” she said “well, I’m a mermaid. ATTACK!” she yelled. “Wait!” A girl called. They stopped for a second, then kept going. “Foolish girl your charmspeak is not powerful enough!” She said “I need help from another child of Poseidon!” I yelled. Then Percy stood up. “What do I have to do!” Realization dawned on me. “You're my brother!?” “Yes!” he said, “But not for long, if we don’t hurry up, so let's get this over with!” They slowly stopped fighting and realized the mermaid and she jumped back in the lake. Everyone calmed down. “Percy, give Braxton a quick tour.” Chiron said. We started walking around, and I started thinking Why does everyone think he is so much funner than me? then Percy started a chat:

Him: “What?”
Me:“huh?”
Him:“You were staring at me… like admire staring.”
Me: “sorry… It's just...huh.”

“I think you're to cool to be my brother” I spit out, “I don't know what I did to deserve you as a brother.” He smiled “Thanks.” he said. I got in bed. After a couple of minutes I ask, “Ok, before I say anything, don’t interrupt me. I may speak a little fast. Will I meet Leo, Jason, Piper, Annabeth, Frank, Hazel, Nico, and Will?” He chuckled, “Sure.”

One Week Later
. .

I snuck up on the Hades ready for the yelling and screaming from Nico. I charged in “Nico, I’m ready for my Itali-” I said gasping at the sight. “oh miei dèi!” I whispered in Italian.

No one's POV:

Braxton saw what he never thought he’d never see before: Leo Valdez and Nico making out. “Quindi ... forse dovrei lasciare ?” He said(in Italian) with a smirk. Nico scrambled out from under Leo, blushing furiously, “Uh ... non è quello che sembra . Lo giuro!” He said. “A destra ... Beh non mi aspettavo di vederti qui Leo .” spoke Braxton. “W-what?” Leo said. “Oh yeah I forgot… what I said was ‘Riiiiiiight... Well I didn't expect to see you hear Leo.’” “Oh” He blushed. “miei dèi tua così carino quando si arrossire” Nico whispered.

Nico’s POV:

. Two Hours later .

Nico was nervous… Braxton had stood up and made him sing a song, with a sly grin on his face. I stood in front of the was so much fear it was overwhelming “This is for all the fears people have.”

I’m stuck in your head
I’m back, back, from the dead
I’m calling you out I’m taking you down
Don’t come around
I’m fearless

Whoooaa whoooooooooaaa
I got the upper hand now
And you're losing ground
You never had to fight back
I never lost the round
You see the gloves are coming off
Tell me when you’ve had enough
Yeah
Ready for a showdown
And we’re face to face
I think I’ll rearrange it put you into place
You don’t get to get the best of me
Check it you're afraid of me
I’m stuck in your head
I’m back, back from the dead
Got you running scared
I’m fearless
I’m calling you out
I’m taking you down
But you come around
I’m fearless
I’m fearless

I’m fearless
You used to make my heart pound
Just the thought of you
But now you're in the background
Whatcha gonna do?
People's fears started leaving, some stayed, I have to get rid of them, I thought.
Sound off, if you hear this
We’re feeling fearless
We’re feeling fearless
I’m stuck in your head
I’m back, back, from the dead
Got you running scared
I’m fearless
I’m stuck in your head
I’m back, back, from the dead
I’m calling you out I’m taking you down
But don’t you come around
I’m fearless
I’m stuck in your head
I’m back, back, from the dead
I’m fearless, got you running scared
I’m fearless
I’m calling you out I’m taking you down
But don’t you come around
I’m
Gold Testament chapter 5 . 1/20/2016
I am so sorry to hear about the loss of your brother.
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