I hope that you decide to continue this story!

Gah! CLIFFHANGERS! KHLJGFDUTSRYASJDKGFHLKJDGKHF

Seriously, I was on the edge of my-well-theoretical chair-during this whole situation. GAH THE ENDING WHAT HAPPENS?

Omg. The scene with The Keeper was hilarious, and a good way to build up to the action. :D

Gah! What a way to build up to the action mission XD

Interesting chapter, I can't wait to see how Sky pulls off her first assassination after all the time of planning.

Haha. Love this chapter :D

Nice descriptions and great intros for everyone. XD

Awesome, update ASAP! Vittoria agli Assassini! :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

Nice chapter, I just wish I knew what the Arabic part meant because all that shown up were little squares but I like the dream portion. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

Great way to explain the story more :D

I definitely like this story, when the foreign languages came up I was like: 'Uhh, do I need to put this through Google translate?" until the last sentence was in English and I figured that was what the other sentences meant. And I don't know if it was supposed to be written like that but in the part where Jamy (I'm not sure if it was her or not) was being initiated into the brotherhood since I don't know what time that took place in since it was the REM stage but I'm referencing AC:B the burn goes on the left hand ring finger not the index but if it was supposed to be that then sorry for the blabbering. The dreams of the men torturing the little girl was horrible. I can't wait to see what you have planned for this series.

Awesome! So intense!

It doesn't seem rushed at all. :)