That's really nice. Good job!

That was wonderful. You really captured all of the emotions I believe Remus would have nad the descriptions are perfect. I really like the light imagery with the stars and the moon which also serves in a way as foreboding (sp?), it really works. Love it! :)

~ Katie Black

wow, very deep. i like it a lot. i hope you get plenty of reviews on it!

Peace,

Summer Lyon

P.S.: Please check out my poem "conquering our Enemies' I think you would like it.