Reviews for Not According to Plan
Ellae chapter 1 . 8/30/2015
LOVE that brilliant recovery Hermione made in the end. I loathe the stammering, embarrassed morning-after Hermione that's so common. HBIC Hermione is a boss.
xdragonslayerx chapter 2 . 5/29/2012
I don't think I ever read the second part, so you'll be happy to know I spit a drink all over my table when I read these words:

"One thing was certain: if he had slept with her, he had rocked her world. No question"

Jesus, Draco, add more arrogance to that statement! I think you lacked some words about your huge wand somewhere in there.
Qoheleth chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Dear Avianahelena:

You write good drunks, I'll say that for you. Lucille Ball could almost have played Hermione in this story. (Only she couldn't, of course, because you'd have to have been much slyer if you expected to get this plot past the Hays Office. That's what I miss about censorship; sex had so much more style when you had to pretend that you weren't talking about it.)

But you didn't need to know that last bit. So let's just leave it at "You write good drunks" and call it a night, shall we?

Sincerely,

Qoheleth
Draco mudiliar chapter 2 . 9/2/2011
I am going right away to read the suquel!
Lingo10 chapter 2 . 7/30/2011
lol sly Hermione is hot!
punkhale chapter 2 . 7/28/2011
Looooved this foc, going to read the sequel now :D
WonderstruckLove chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
May I just say that I love this story! The remarks made my Draco did not ruin it at all. Frankly, it made the chapter much more enjoyable. This is my first fanfiction I've read on this site, and I'm in love with it. I would describe it as sexy, humerous, and a five star chapter for all Dramione addicts. Keep up the good work.
Sapphire1031 chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Very good however just to be clear... they didn't actually have sex, right. They both passed out correct, but they just think they did.
maggiebreen chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
it made me laugh, alot. good job!
Jessy Black chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Sequel please!Why you ask? Well, that's easy to say: It was a brilliantly written, too short , too unfinished One-Shot.
XTearaX chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
I am going to have to unashamedly agree that you need to write a smutquel to this...
ATYHRHKPL chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
I am going to unashamedly demand a sequel to this, as I adore bitchy Hermione far too much. Please and Thankyou. :D
M.S.Carol chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
that was fun...would have liked more
Rcnz chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Love!
fireprincess326 chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Hahaha! I love it! Can't wait for the sequal!
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