Reviews for Not According to Plan |
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![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE that brilliant recovery Hermione made in the end. I loathe the stammering, embarrassed morning-after Hermione that's so common. HBIC Hermione is a boss. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't think I ever read the second part, so you'll be happy to know I spit a drink all over my table when I read these words: "One thing was certain: if he had slept with her, he had rocked her world. No question" Jesus, Draco, add more arrogance to that statement! I think you lacked some words about your huge wand somewhere in there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dear Avianahelena: You write good drunks, I'll say that for you. Lucille Ball could almost have played Hermione in this story. (Only she couldn't, of course, because you'd have to have been much slyer if you expected to get this plot past the Hays Office. That's what I miss about censorship; sex had so much more style when you had to pretend that you weren't talking about it.) But you didn't need to know that last bit. So let's just leave it at "You write good drunks" and call it a night, shall we? Sincerely, Qoheleth |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am going right away to read the suquel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol sly Hermione is hot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looooved this foc, going to read the sequel now :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() May I just say that I love this story! The remarks made my Draco did not ruin it at all. Frankly, it made the chapter much more enjoyable. This is my first fanfiction I've read on this site, and I'm in love with it. I would describe it as sexy, humerous, and a five star chapter for all Dramione addicts. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good however just to be clear... they didn't actually have sex, right. They both passed out correct, but they just think they did. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it made me laugh, alot. good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sequel please!Why you ask? Well, that's easy to say: It was a brilliantly written, too short , too unfinished One-Shot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am going to have to unashamedly agree that you need to write a smutquel to this... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am going to unashamedly demand a sequel to this, as I adore bitchy Hermione far too much. Please and Thankyou. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was fun...would have liked more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha! I love it! Can't wait for the sequal! |