it was okay

Awesome

God, why didn't you put the idea of re-writing important parts of the story? this man/woman is the best iv ever seen!"

to mushy

Very nice! I really enjoyed that!

only one fucking chapter mmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooooooooo orrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeee

That was really sweet, well done!

very cute!

It was amazing:D

I liked it! I personally think that love stories are possible the most difficult pieces to write, but you made it seem facile! I liked how you stayed true to the show. It wasn't like you added anything to dramatically change the plot, you merely enhanced it. Also, you kept the characters in there actual character! (I could totally hear Aang saying his lines!) Your grammar seemed pretty good and your writing style was quick and to the point. Bravo! Keep writing! You're very good at it!

Just right I just wish they had another interruption that would have been funny. Other wise nicely done.

Love it! It's so mega fluffy! Just wondering, is this a one shot? Cuz I like the awesome idea of more. I think you did a great job!