Reviews for Equilibrium
Guest chapter 3 . 12/25/2016
It's funny how Eric decided that being fang raped by two vampires almost to the point of being drained didn't "harm" Sookie and that it's absolutely fine for him to use her any way he wants under the guise of "extenuating circumstances". If Sookie chooses to stay with Eric, then she's stupider than I ever thought she'd be and foolishly almost deserves his abuse.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/25/2016
I'm glad you're not presenting Eric as someone worthy of love. He's nothing more than a greedy, manipulative bastard who wants to take and rape but never give or love.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/25/2016
How did Sookie keep from laughing in Eric's face when he told her that he cared about her? He had kidnapped her, chained her in his filthy, disgusting basement, held her down so Russell could fang rape her, fang raped her himself, then expected her to save and babysit Russell after she was foolish enough to save him (Eric).
RedJane12 chapter 3 . 10/25/2013
Great story - I love how it explores the psychological aftermath of learning she had disappeared for a year and events she felt as just recent (like learning about Bill's betrayal) were nearly forgotten by everyone else... Except Eric... This was never explored int he show because you know TB is all about lots of fast editing, nudity and shocking moments rather than storytelling or character development. I do agree with other reviewers that more chapters would be very welcome. Not sure if there was a plot you had in mind when you started to write this but it does feel as if the understanding between Eric & Sookie has a few more backs and forths before they truly reach an... equilibrium...
Scattered Kaleidoscope chapter 3 . 6/12/2013
Painful and confusing! I like it.
lilydragonsblood chapter 3 . 5/24/2013
sooooo loving this story!
C-JoJo chapter 3 . 3/18/2013
I just read this, and I would LOVE it if you continued it. This version of Eric is like crack to me!
washed away again chapter 3 . 12/28/2012
My dear you should definitely continue this story. I know you are working on others because I get chapter updates, but I think this one is my favorite so I would love more chapters if you have any ideas floating around in your head!
grumpbear chapter 3 . 7/8/2012
that was so sad :(
marylinevelyn chapter 3 . 6/11/2012
This is such a good story and I'm so upset it has 'complete' stamped on it! Oh well, it's definitely going in my favorites and I guess I'll just have to turn to your other stories...
Deleted100200300 chapter 3 . 5/13/2012
I truly loved it! Amazing work!
B-Rock525 chapter 3 . 3/2/2012
Very good chapters. Are you going go continue?
jrandmarilynyahoo.com chapter 3 . 12/10/2011
why have you not finished this story ?

Where have you gone
vikingtrubie chapter 3 . 12/9/2011
Oh that was a great short story. Really would LOVE more of it. Thank you very much for writing and sharing.
treewitch703 chapter 2 . 12/2/2011
So who was that vampire? Not Jessica because you referred to him as he.
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