This is so sweet and realistic. Love takes time, usually a bumpy road of denialconfused feelings. We see Lucy here doesn't quickly jump around dating Natsu despite her unsure feelings. She wants to know more about himcan't help but slowly falling in love w/ him in the process unlike in other fics I read (where they immediately canoodle with each other after Natsu confessed. Like they're unexperienced but still does thatD)

Love how they are in character too. Natsu, the usual loud mouthnot faced w/ everything and Lucy, who easily gets embarasseda tsundere XD)

hi this was so adorable? I'm crying this was so cute I have like, eight cavities now so thanks for that!

This one is sooo cute

"I'm all fired up for you, baby." JSODSOOFOOOFIFOFOFOOV HAHAHAH I FREAKIN FANGIRLED AT THAT GOOD JOB AUTHOR

So cute adorable . ω

Awwww how cute was that?! ️️️

i really like it, somehow, it's different from the usual stuff

this was beautiful

Oh good God, I love looove this soo much 3

ommg I havent read a good one shot in months and ohlly laWRD! Its THE BEST IVE READ IN MONTHS!

Ahhhhh! This is so good!

Wow. I don't think I've ever read a fanfiction with as few grammar errors as that. Also, you kept the characters' personalities almost identical to the anime/manga, unlike other fanfics I've read. The pacing is also very realistic, along with the how quickly lucy realized she loves natsu. It wasn't just "I think I love Natsu. I'll ask him out”, it was slower and more believable than most fanfics out there.

A really good story. Nicely put together.

OMG! It's just sooooo sweet. I lovvvvve it.. In HAPPY STYLE... *wink*

This is adorable