So perfect.

Your writing is so beautiful.

Oh, that was truly fabulous.

beautiful. made me want to cry...

Amazing piece. I'm not sure I have any adequate words to convey how truly amazing this is. The way you use words and images is magical, it made my heart ache, full of intense, conflicting emotions.

Please, please write more Castle stories!

Wow. Some pieces just leave you without words and this is one of them. Gorgeous. I want to quote my favorite lines but I think I would have to just copy and past the whole thing. I'm sure you know this, but you are an extraordinary, excellent writer.

"Hours and hours and he watches her because maybe he'll never again have this luxury. Maybe it's already over only he doesn't know it."

Perfect. Sobs.

And the part where she breaks down in the car and her thinks that maybe he doesn't know her at all. So good.

I love this. I hope you write more soon.

Nice work - I certainly enjoyed your take on the finale. Well written and nicely put together.

"He never had any intention of being noble when it came to this moment with her". I love that...good story.

That was so f'ing awesome.

I read Thaumaturgy yesterday, and this story today, and I think they're both wonderful. I love your style of writing, and your characterisation is great. What I particularly like about this story is that we see the night of Montgomery's death. A lot of post-finale fic understandably deals with Beckett's shooting, but there's a whole load of angsty potential stemming from the hangar scene. Great job.

"And you'll be by my side?" she questions, although it's not really a question.

"Yes," he replies.

She shifts on her feet and leans against him. "I'll be all right."

Best lines ever. Love it. Please keep writing post finale fics. I love them!

"And you'll be by my side?" she questions, although it's not really a question.

"Yes," he replies.

She shifts on her feet and leans against him. "I'll be all right."

Best lines ever. Love it. Please keep writing post finale fics. I love them!

This was a very beautiful story. Extraordinary and simple and complex and a huge onslaught of everything. I loved every single line, you almost brought me to tears.

When Kate told Rick not to be noble, I wanted to give you a virtual hug. When Rick told her to not stop him please, I wanted to give you a huge virtual kiss.

Thank you so, so very much for writing this story. Keep writing please. I'm sure you'd make many people on this planet happy if you did.

Lina

this was beautiful and sincere, thanks!

Wow! I'm flabbergasted. Beautiful, Believable, poignant story. Perfect.