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Debbie Hicks chapter 12 . 8/20/2018
then AALIEN RASTTLESNAKEES LOOK OUT THEN RAN FASTEST Then Bitten Bella's other arm hardest b y With Alien Rattlesn ake poisonous lethasl veenom groweling theen fastest to her b est frien ds b itten then then Volturi foun d me guilty wsho created yiou tell us m y sc ream s hisdssing then thebn EEEEEExecuted this one turn ede her in to a sailor solduier you die as well Bella's growls was rumbling studying her crest an d CRACKED! Hweer screams of myself with twin fan gs you die for creation of n ewborn s Murdered!with her with b est the Ser foun d Myself dying wsith best I WAN T HER I WANT HER!Felix you kn ow the law you die from us m ty sc reams awassd heaerd with her then KILLED!LE Get over here yiyu die with four with tem then ATOMIZED! B ELLA! Die with them then EEExec uted from here the head found m yself dying wsith thern Healed Had Hum an superstrength Pain! sc ream ing taske her hea d then Don 't she surrenders theen KILED With them then riopped good they b en destroyed without mem ories then atom ized then b rought here m yself was with V enom Al,ice she c an't con trol look I N eed to breed stop n ewborn s stop get her wsith them m y sctream s good EEXTIN CT With them! riped freely then b rought here Msters ab out her stench it's not human then sweithBella's bitten her onto the other Wrist with the first piercerd freely with theirsa died with child tran sport death at childbirth mishap good my brother destroyed them won deroyus b ring them then too laste drained as all of blood good the ser heard a movie n oise then my heart stopped beating then the Venom begasn to Override into my fried veins wsith hers wsith theirs was from m y kids from Seth's wsith b oth had mate then fasding mem ories a song played the Katrta Ritual heard a changing heer thye blood began to whril fading from m y NASA Bod ysuit then with my hasndsright her then hair turn ing more firm er an d greaster but fuller lost ab lity then the ending scene suddenly fiercely Pierced open my Fully Falkor's Red eyes weild in fear Alice she is hurt then then Hugged With true Newborn strength Then True Volcanoic in our throats Burned! Bellsa we ned to hun t don't worry trust your intin ct an d hold your unendless breath it was not my own voice thorax and vocasl cords shattered Alice who did to you Volturi they are a very old b ut ancient but royal coven of civlized but controlled Vampirers thenblacking outside good guilty you b rtoke law of these untam e on es ATOMIZED ! B lew apart with witn eses with kids destroyed were forebidden to reside then then myself had a power then began then m yyself began to ratttlee things was Telekinetic fully time was Telekin esis theen blew freeeely sliced with them bring therm brought here th from the movie the Craft suddenly hearding m ore acutely clearest as the sea blown from here with them b rought here then suddenly used my Telekinetic powers rose with Arm s straighten poised like Mina Harker dressed from NASA Was from Starman eyes were still Falkor's Red as Blood what is she Look I Need is Animal Blood holy Toledo howe you do that I Rose like a bride of King Dracula I Look young I am in fact Forty-two in Vampire Age Alice mopped the floopr twice spick and spasn Bella relax Uh I Got a bad Omen then used my nose letting loose a hard growling so Bella's throat she too was growling very powerful Alice calm her down I Smelt Victoria Growling 104 she recalled gasp you just snarled very richer but powerful CARLISLE! The the growling you made is real b in go ten our throats were Murderous then with Bre an d Dieo then us were hungry off line emotions from The Vampire Diaries herself Hissing b aring her twin fangs myself her sire so they were more then hun ted as all of them EXECUTED! Bring these on es to justice then Heads sliced b ut tore apart cursed to Roasm Earth as a punishjmen my powers suddenly Activ asted but awakened the block was shattered Bella wass really angry growling saying By 2018 I Desire a Ancient long dead century war against your species an d our race I Swear it By Dracula's name our people will destroy you With Lycans! blown tearing good bring them then brought here cursed with bitter death was bitter immortality with as all of them brought here they reported she is dead with them as asll of them but they were bitten by force Stewie is guilty of crimes nuked freely now the seer that is very harsher movie words from who Dracula gasp oh my god you don't die rose again CARLISLE! Then too late more than as all of animals were killed blood drained replaced it was quite very richer than normal In time ourselves were immortal but cursed ourselves were sparkling in Kirai Sparkling Diamonds oh my god your eyes are yellow no than k you if you please we are Vegetarians on a Sailorr Soldier diet n uked pierced freeely were as all of morer v asnished frely b rought here then goode they are dead took care of ther army converted as Cursed Vegetarians un able to die out they are as all of them oh my head going to b reach a Warp core Explosion too late shielding most powerful trained b y myself so they used a notebook then ugh Ooops measles that's ok right then now yikes they got planetary ablities Eleazar then Bella foc used her gift sighten a blinp very sharper BETAZED CRYSTAL POWER! MAKE-UP! Nails exploding so us/them transformed then stood welded weaponry Alice oh my god our foreheads shining a radiant energy golden Colored tiaras were more toned oh my god Awk! That's it you'r Sushi Rin Jin Rypu Pryu Shi Chi Chou Bai TOU ZEN! EVIL SPIRIT BE EXORCIZED! Sounds of Japanese drum\s blaring more fiery YOUMA TAISAN! Her ward was a sword Alice she's a priestess PURIFIIED! RELEASE! Too late whriling herself training harder then a Crunching of Garrett oops I Sense Evil gomen Good god Woman oh yeah myself had a wrinked skirt touched ten a Sharpest voltage then a Zap! harder like Kate's powers OW! my clothes Alice they kn ow she done created a group ofd slayers oh my god you can't die no then n uked freely then too late no longer here Stewie say something Jupiter, I Summon the Forces of Nature storms and Lightening to Vanquish this EVIL! O' Guardian planet BRING DOWN THE STORM! SUPREME THUNDER CRASH ! The sky raging with me young lady Telekinetic Geogenesis Then too late a strangest alien power surge training with them if on the moon harder she's gifted but posssessed Help! Sir! she's lethal with her planet power oh yeah you want trouble pal you are lookin' for it the name is trouble beware of Zeus's wrath ulp he paled of me toned was with a raging stormiest temper was violent gleeep Momma mia he was afraid of tall muscular men oh man over here handsome me nah you are good looking but very powerful oh no Crap women down boy he's handsome Paul meet her puppies Meet her named after her crazy dog a father good god puppies not this time junior species Alaskan husky she was more smarter oh no our pets had young kittens/puppies are tiny at birth in time was a Zoo and a Animal house to reside in a newest state.
Lucy Greenhill chapter 10 . 8/5/2018
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Debbie Hicks chapter 10 . 8/1/2018
11/ Black out theen suddenly crunchded heassds theen then with b est frieends then Bellas felt as greatest asweakiening with m yself weith eeeeight thousasn ds m y head going to blown thsat woke her poweres so m yself train ed taught her with a plasnetary ablity was a mebntal shieeld wesho eexpoosed ourselvers were not humasssn s then b lascking out you there who turn ed you all with then Felix trip the newborns asliive screams of us/theeem FIREScorcherd then EXECUTION ! MURDERED! T change came was far too gone tyhrer went to out aide you die with theeem theeen turn eds both ATOMIZED! From hallowed out bodies were b rought here myself screassminmg Talke care of his mate kill her m y screrams was heasrd with theeirs theeen CRACKED!Harder then with them then too later bring them here to both then too laste weas dying with her with as all of pierceds scars and bites Alice weho did to her with Bella Swan then a strasngest aslien force of nature a rattling noise Telekinesis she's Telekinetic oh my god Bella she's a mental shield with them with powers then fled then captured us/them killed! ATOMIZED Fully time then brought thre here we bring ye news they tried to save them no use killed with child transported dead blew up good then too late the head found the cause you are what dead hunted both too late Chained had eight were ATOMIZED! Punished from here then were Extinct from here but they Destroyed from here our screams was heard good bring the corpses here then too late SLICED By impalement brought here but too late then killed them of a coverrn/pack growth tore from here then too late the damages was real then sickest gaunt very paler frail with Reyerson 's Disease oh my god they are ill from blood loss then BLACKING OUTSIDE Snapped from here brought here deceaased of the disease good they are poisoned wonderous by now the chasnge wass real then Who did to them Volturi then snapped open our newest eyes were Falkor's Red eyes then First hunt then as all of animals drained then suddenly IMPALED From sliced necks tore became immortal but SLICED Bring them guilty of most three t four crimes then blew apart then from here brought here we briong you the guilty haver broke law of the crime of murder treason witchcraft exposure an d endangerment Vierdct DEATH! screams was heard then took lives from us/them then All of guards from here then the seer reported they are not guilty blacking outside shattered from bodiesa were as all of them immigrated brought here then destroyed with as all most as all remains were as all of them bloween as all of guards reported we con verted as Vegetarians then Atomized from here but their as all of finalist but very last on es then too later destroyed of bad blood supply deadliesat to them blown reported with ass all of they con vertede as assll of Vegetariasns are dead blew freely of Hybrids Victoria with as all of wild ones we killed are dead were murdered they are forbidden to breed but they are different from here are not human s are Born Vampire slayers/hunters are venomous but some save with as all of them destroyed as asall of them impaled forced to Hunt animals sliced go from help then witnessed as planet BETAZED CRYSTAL POWER! MAKE-UP! Too late we yellede with as all of them then sssuddenly a strangest force of galactic nature exploding to action her trilling super sonic Xena Warrior Princes's war dirge exploded then stood gallant but fiercer oh no then thast with as all of them with planetary ablities born with blosd again burst friieely n ukedwith both four smashed good then brought here killed now Vampirers ruled us/as all of on to Vulcan oh my god they did this the things with as all of them deported we can't return to Earth then used three weith both then ATOMIZED From here brought here we bring you the accused defection on e last crime then Murdered from here took from us/ass asll of them were All of them bitten from here then too late they were infected blew apart by n ow as all of them them con quested as all of lands took from here stolen from here our looks/voices Exploding were as all of Vampires then too late met were both now too late were unable to procreate as well no longer alive but too late blown frozen no longer humans were far too stronger gotten powerful freed vanished from here thast brought here from here suddenly from our newest superstrength sauperspeed an d increased supersenses heighten but more enhanced Alice they were born from the womb drain ed now stopped aging are Immortalized Vampire salyin g/hunting sailor guardian/knight team You'r Sushi Rin Jin Shi Chi Chou TOU ZEN! EVIL SPIRIT BE EXORCIZED! YOUMA TAISAN! PURIFIED! Bella Swan leaping then all of the sudden sounds from the NASA Bodysuit exploding drums then herself vowed vengeance was too powerful so myself was born differently then Crunched that's it you'r ancient history! then In the name of Jupiter I Call the forces of storms nature and lightening to CRUNCH THESE MUCKHEADS JUPITER COCONUT CYCLONE ! Blaring out my planetary ablities Whriling she's gifted in Telekinetic Geogenesis Crap good god woman oh yeah you want trouble pal lookin' for it the name is trouble! myself was with Herculean superstrength was stronger Ack! she's abnormal tall but Athletic came to Washington on foot more logical step heard thundering roaring dressed in her closplay clothes claimed to be Kino Makoto had a trust fund oh my god walked to school like her wearing a most fashionable hair ponytail with loose strands eye color Fiery Green oh m y god they don e this she never ages or dies with them.
Lucy Greenhill chapter 9 . 7/28/2018
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Lucy Greenhill chapter 8 . 7/22/2018
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Lucy Greenhill chapter 7 . 7/14/2018
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Debbie Hicks chapter 2 . 6/9/2018
3. Chapter 3. Then BITTEN Bit\ella onto the other wrist weith the first weith as all of most then by reprouction an d m ated then Volturi found me gyuilty witrh bitten with thre you die Lycan s with bitten then EEEExecuted tore from here weith Alien Rattlesn ake vemom then MURDEDERED USA/MOST With hers with bitten besat CLAIRE YOUNG BITTEN With us/most captured with immortal childeewn aAkilled tore clotheas as all of blod theen MURDERED Then Humanity taken from us ten DESTROYED! blood was drained as all good you die from them then SLIENCED! Then the threre found us/most then were n ext with us/most four then im paled ten POPED B rought here then the very as all of Venom as most heaviest of all of them blew apart brought here Layc an bittern them what these phaased un der a full mon then Found then Chained EXEXCUTED From here heads ton frely Punished were severed from here then were kiled then then it was over Alice they b en Turned with tem then blew apart ten With us/most torn freely brought here then IMPALED From here phaased with them Were under a full mon ofically then KILLED! Bring them as all of them you ae Cursed with death punished then Sliced from here ten Forbideen to enter homes ass all of them blew apart ten too soon EXTINCT Thenbrought here now too late the head tried to save my life my heart stoped so her with therirs as all woke up to our nwest lives deceased then ten Smashed with them Blew apart were unable to be killed freed of life now death were healing ten Rec overed ten hissing like them had Human blood into all our system then Chained this ones killed both you are guilty then Felix rip them then Purplish flames killed torn freely nowe punished were into Alaska then All of animmald then b rain s eaten then were drained killed then As all of most then blaring then As all of brought here then reported they are dead good poisoned them as all of them in to as all of ashes then were most as all guards Alice she ate b You heard of IZombie it's a TV Series ugh we can eat brains of animals oh my god as all of them from as all of states drained but eaten then blew apart then Shattered freely now brought here we report they died here but they are deceased from here Atomized them no longer alive the living dead had a ravenous hunger from brain s of Animals then were Eaten with help then us/them had slow hearts stopped beating then blew freely as all of them ugh one was ill um ghoul sorry we need brains please Alice she's dead but can't die of it then were stark hungry very hungry blown freely as all popped pierced sliced no longer alive or living dead both bought here good no longer but they were as all with blood but Venom still here but sealed oh my god that was it deceased.
Embers And Spies chapter 13 . 2/4/2017
Please update! Your story is sooooo good!
Lunasky99 chapter 13 . 7/7/2013
Update soon! I really like your story!
MidnightWolf191 chapter 13 . 11/20/2012
AWESOME
IWriteStories1 chapter 13 . 7/8/2012
Aww seth and stevie. Lol poor Embry. He should imprint. Yeah. Love the story...awkward...kbai
sampsontina12 chapter 13 . 6/30/2012
update
Of Darkness and of Light chapter 13 . 4/19/2012
Did she get imprinted by Seth or Embry or no one, Seth has the territorial thing going on and Embry won't stop trying to get her to like him.
awesomeami316 chapter 13 . 2/16/2012
Yes! Haha this is so funny and I was laughing the hole time I read this! Don't change Stevie she is not a Mary Sue
madittude99 chapter 13 . 1/7/2012
I like this story..did Seth imprint on Stevie?

-madittude99

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