Wow.

Very impressive.

"Magnus, rape is wrong no matter what century it is." Difficult topic. Loved it!

"I'm not a victim,never have been, never will be." Loved this line. Great story, that is exactly how I would expect her to react.

...wow...

Intense. Very compelling.

For some odd reason, I get the impression of Will, at the end of this, as an insistent, yet concerned puppy, when something's happened to its owner, worriedly snuggling upto her, nudging her with it's nose, and licking her hand in an adorable fashion, and while it annoyed the owner at first, she eventually realized that the support from the sweet little puppy was appreciated, and scratched its head, letting it cuddle up next to her.

I'm not sure why, but that's the general feel I got from this - aside from the rest, what with Magnus informing Will that not only is this not the first time, but it was practically part of her society's way of life when she was young, and that she knew how to get over it. Speaking of which - can I say that that was a great scene? The sad truth of it was compelling, and the calm matter-of-fact tone in which it was written, and in which I invisioned it, added to the quiet, sad truth of the matter.

Great piece. I'm gonna go sneak a peak at what else you've written.

That was briliantly writen very well done. You handled such a sensitive subject matter in an really good way. Im impressed and moved.

"And here a mere boy dares presume to know what I need."

ummm... wow! that was Brilliant!

Brilliantly written!

Very nicely done!

Hey there,

WOW this story truly does justice to the horrendous act of rape without outright dealing with it by slapping it in the face.

Wonderful, heartfelt, honest, and terrific. Nice job.

Thanks,

Melissa

I have a tear in my eye. You wrote this very well, and realisitcally, especially for the subject matter.

You did an excellent job with a very difficult subject. I can absolutely see Magnus reacting this way and my heart just broke for her and for Will.