please pm me when you story is reposted

... Mother of God man, you've got a decent writing style, but your protagonist is so overpowered its Gary Stuish. Now thats something some people like, but for a lot of us the magics in the journey.

Anime is a great example, main character has a special trait, but crazy awesome is achieved at the climax of the storyline. Right now Harry could tear through the first 3 books challenges wihout breaking sweat.

Cheers

ah excellent story

looks interesting please continue

Any pairings? Maybe rider? Please nobody does a rider pairing.

An interesting start! I'm looking forward to see how the story will continue, so keep up the good work!

This is a great story. Will you still be working on this or is it abandoned?

Interesting story please continue soon

That is massively overpowered for an eleven year old he is crazy insane overpowered

OD isn't supposed to be capitalized. It's just od, or Od if it is at the start of a sentence, like this: "Od is the force...". Also, when in use, od or mana is usually referred to as prana, so they don't say "imbue od into this weapon", it'd be "imbue prana into this weapon". Or that's the way I've been told it works anyways.

Also, "acts similar to Origin Bullets...". Er, no. Origin bullets actualize "binding" and "severing", and combined, this "severs" something and "binds" it back together, which causes the wound to not heal, because it is already healed, just in the worst way possible, and when it strikes active circuits, it short-circuits them (sort of) and destroys them via aforementioned "severing" and "binding", forever removing the victim's ability to use magecraft. Nasty stuff.

Whatever bullets Harou use, unless they actualize severing and binding the way Kiritsugu's origin bullets do, they do not act similar. By the way, Kiritsugu's origin bullets are made from his own bones, his ribs to be precise. Alloy bullets and rubyholy water bullets do not act similar to origin bullets, though if they cause major damage, I don't know. Only that they are highly unlikely to cause that damage the way Kiritsugu's bullets do.

I suggest you check the Type-Moon wikia out. They got loads of useful info, and it explains this sort of stuff way better than I can.

Jack the Ripper huh? Well if she were to go with Haruo to Hogwarts then it should prove interesting plus it could be a nice pairing. Also, no offense but did you plan on making Haruo's fighting abilities a hybrid of Shirou and Kiritsugu? 'Cause that's the only thing I can think after hearing the description of his workshop.

Good chapter... and I pity the Death Muchers and Molypants.
Seriously, I pity them.
Trained by EXTRA!Assassin in martial arts and armed to the teeths? It is not overkill?
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Nice!

Finally is arrives! The first Night is pretty good for a start! Though I wonder how does Haruo get all these weapons anyway? I know that every Magus (with the exception of Kiritsugu and Shirou) would ever use modern technology or weapons. Also what happen to Assassin (Fate/Extra)? Was he killed by Gilgamesh just like Herwald's Assassin (Herwald Einzbern)?

Can't wait for the next chapter and the next chapter of the Heir of the Dark Evangel!

he seems a little overly skilled, both mystic eyes and face? were would he acquire some of the skills? harry potter was never really THAT good looking.