| Reviews for Pleasured Noises |
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kogan 4ever chapter 1 . 4/12/2013 O My GOD... I LOVED THIS STORY IT WAS REALLY A FUCKIN TURNON SO YOU BETTER MAKE SOME MORE KINKY STORIES [KOGAN] |
gleechild chapter 1 . 11/6/2011 Daaaayyyumm... that was HOT. It was absolutely perfect. Definitely NO need to feel as though this was in any way inadequate. I LOVED this VERY much... so damn HOT HOT HOT! Did I mention that it was hot? *fans self* Okay, I'll stop gushing now... ;0) and I anxiously wait for moreeeeee smut from you... oh yes I do! - Sharon |
Anonymynous chapter 1 . 9/30/2011 Ohhhh you did everything right...SO FREAKIN HOT If you excuse me I have to go change my pants... |
Ice-cream-and-cake-cake chapter 1 . 9/11/2011 YUMMY! How big are they? |
Bluee Skies Andd SunShinee chapter 1 . 9/3/2011 Nice ! Nxt Chapter Be Jusst Ass Hot Lol Lovee It |
GabrieltheTrickster chapter 1 . 8/31/2011 I hate and love you right now. Hate: WHY CANT I BE THIS GOOD?/ Love: do I even have enough characters for this list? |
Random Bunny chapter 1 . 8/13/2011 That was so hot your writing style is amazing! |
Whatwhy chapter 1 . 7/31/2011 This was so freaking hot! So freaking sexy and yummy! This part was freaking hot as hell! I am so glad that you made this story :D With that though in mind, Logan dropped to his knees at Kendall's bedside and stared at the big erection inches away from his face. Before he lost his nerve, he began to firmly rub Kendall through the fabric. His hand was moving up and down the bulge swiftly. He could feel the warmth coming from Kendall's hard dick, and it only made him harder. Kendall seemed to like the new sensation as his hips began to rise from the bed and his moans became louder. This was good, but Logan wanted more. Logan stopped his hand's movements and cautiously pulled down Kendall's red pajamas until they were down to his knees. He could feel his mouth water at the sight of Kendall's erection leaking precum through his green boxers. The brunet closed in and inhaled deeply, taking in the other's addicting musky scent. He was suddenly feeling very lightheaded as he was overwhelmed by all these sensations around him. He couldn't believe he was doing this, but it was far too late to back out now. Besides, even if it wasn't, Logan wasn't so sure he would back out. If anything, he was even more eager to finally get a glimpse of Kendall'sbig manhood. He was getting sick of the wait by now. Logan grabbed the boxers and roughly pulled them down with a growl. He stared in shock at what was in front of him. Kendall was even more beautiful than he imagined. Of course, size was never a question, seeing as it was pretty obvious from the start that the blond was indeed well endowed. Logan didn't know what it was. Maybe it was the way Kendall's dick sprung free from his underwear and bounced for a few more seconds afterwards. Maybe it was the way it was standing proudly, surrounded by a small tuft of blond, curly pubic hairs. Or maybe it could have even been the way it glistened due to the continuous stream of precum that oozed from the tip. |
OptimisticallyHeartbroken chapter 1 . 7/19/2011 me like. me like alot. especially loved the part where logan doubted he heard what he heard and when he was like "did i do something wrong" i was like "AWWWWW!" like...near tears! |
hellorhymeswithjello chapter 1 . 7/11/2011 Oh my god. What didn't you do right? asdkjhsk this was wonderful! I'm so glad to have read *squeals* Good job and well done! C: |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2011 That was great! Very sexy! |
IceRush chapter 1 . 6/30/2011 Great first smut story, glad you used the corect form of the term brunet for Logan. Most people use the feminine version, but either way works. Sincerely yours, Joey |
rainy dayz and silver dreams chapter 1 . 6/30/2011 That was one of the best I've read in a while...loved it...keep up the good work! |
chataclysmnoire chapter 1 . 6/29/2011 I liked it :) And to the other reviewer, brunet is the male form of brunette. However, not many people know that and constantly use the female form for people of both genders. |
dontcallmenutmeg chapter 1 . 6/29/2011 The story seemed like it was going to be good but... I've found an error that is driving me insane. So, I'm going to point it out. It's spelt 'Brunette' not 'Brunet'. I don't know if I saw any other spelling errors because I did not finish the story. Maybe I will once it's all fixed. I recommend you do so. (: Cause I'd love to read it afterward! , |