I love this story! It is really well written and I love the plot, great idea! Your characterization of everybody was very goode, especially Gwaine! :D Well done! :-)

Ohhhh wow, I really loved this story :D poor Arthur :( but yay Gwaine and Merlin! Great job :3

I feel bad for laughing. Sort of. But sonething about the idea of Arthur going, "Oh, yeah, Morgana and I are having an affair. I toyally go up to her room and we smooch" is funny :)

Awkward imposter hug. I love it.

Oh it's killing me! This is an imposter!

wow! i really like this story! i never once even suspected the stable boy! nice job!

is this the end, or is there going to be another chapter?

Very good story although I wish the end was longer.

Good Story. Although it took a few long chapters and encouragement from other people's reviews to read it through to the end. The end I agree needed to be a little longer. Having Gwaine be the first character on seen was what made it long, in the beginning, for me. Stories that grab me the quickest start off with focusing on Merlin or Arthur in the first few paragraphs. With more banter and less description. I am very glad that this story had no slash (manman being romantic), and I thank you and all the few authors, on this site, who stay away from it. Again Good Story!

Very good plot and all especially w the look a like a

Arthur and all bt I just have to say that the ending felt like it was cut short. It just seemed like the story was done at an akward point, it just felt unfulfilling for how great the story is.

Thanks for sharing this lovely story. The plot is interesting and original and everyone appears perfectly in character. Poor, poor Arthur - but some twisted part of me enjoys seeing him in this state, and the hurt/comfort afterwards, of course. ;-) It's going straight to the favorites.

~Jammeke

A really great story. I wish, there was more.

But well, thanks for sharing non the less, I had a good time reading it and I hope you had a good time writing it

Hey I like this story a lot so far! It's fun and faced paced but not too fast. I havn't noticed any spelling or grammar mistakes, and everyones in character. However the fight scene at the end of this chapter seems a little clunky to me-my eyes wanted to skim right past it. I don't think it needs a rewrite in any way, but breaking the chapter in half may help a lot.

By the way, the rope to take Merlin off the horse was a great idea!

An excellent story! Wish it wasn't over. Well done and hope to read more Merlin stories from you soon!

Really liked the last line in this chapter, really worked!

Great story!