Aww! that was really cute and i loved it! you captured her feelings perfectly, it was great! :)

I like how you painted her realization. Of course, we all wish there was a continuation (e.g. perhaps the moment when Ron realizes his feelings).

Thanks for your comments. Edits made and should show up shortly.

That was cute! The vocabulary and setup was very nice. You might want to use official separators, though, because they look better...and also, sorry for the nitpick, but it's Weasley, not Weasely. There was just a line where you mistyped! :)