Reviews for Alpha
Coolfire30 chapter 380 . 12/26/2019
HuehuehueheHUEHEUEHEUEHEUE BAHAHAHHAHAHAAH I AM SCREAMING! I can just imagine Masamitsu in his Inu form. with his sword dangling in his mouth while running around, his tail wagging behind him... ahhhh the cuteness...
Coolfire30 chapter 349 . 12/24/2019
hahhhh... CUUUUUTTTTEEEEE! Oh god... just imagining a miniature Sesshoumaru in his primal form is...-is... GYAHHHHHH!
Coolfire30 chapter 232 . 12/23/2019
hmm...yes...yes...a pity indeed Sesshoumaru, such a pity...
Coolfire30 chapter 225 . 12/23/2019
Ahhhh...poetic justice at its best.
Coolfire30 chapter 183 . 12/23/2019
oh...my go-d... his inner turmoil has me edging closer to the edge-on the verge of screaming AND crying at the same time.
Coolfire30 chapter 156 . 12/23/2019
ahhhh... chills...I s want this story to never end.
Coolfire30 chapter 132 . 12/23/2019
If I could Favorite this all over again, I would do so in an instant.
Coolfire30 chapter 15 . 12/22/2019
When I read smut/Lemon/Lime, the first that comes to my mind isn'tWow, that was hot, I'm dripping wetno, not at all.

The first thing that comes into my mind when I read such Writings isBeautiful, how can I even compare. How would I even be able to write something so-so 'poetic'. How could I write something so visually stimulating-to the point where the words on the screen seem nothing more than fodder the feed the visuals that are so vividly flashing through my mind-something that flows so smoothly, edging to and fro reality and imaginations...I just..."

Its a whole emotional train wreck that my mind just ... screams at me when I read, and your stories particularly, elicit such reactions from me.
Coolfire30 chapter 12 . 12/22/2019
ahhhh...yes...here I am rereading this fanfic for the... fifth-sixth? time? ... And by God's, I'm still so utterly enthralled by your writing.
Mirage chapter 394 . 11/20/2019
I really did like your story and how you did write -
Very interesting and you did have to read on till end . I hope the second part will be as nice as this story_

This little beings sound like those of princess mononoke. ...the forest spirits that did show up each night together with this forest god...that I find interesting...after seeing this mononoke movie i did think they sound like demons in there demon form from inuyasha...

With miko power and part yokai they ...the new generations of powerful yokaimikopriests children.. should be able to help heal this little being and the spirit and Magic of there worlds...as both are Ying yang and should make something like a bridge between the worlds that was slowly dieing...but maybe I'm wrong
Mirage chapter 382 . 11/19/2019
Interesting how you did it with Ogimachi, that was not a bad way.. he first did sound like a terrible bad guy who nends punishment ...but how you let him look he was just in way over his bead a fearful guy who does not know how to handle such things and what to do and fearful dad. and out of it , so it is good that he steps back and his son has trained well to take up the hob one day...hopeful with woman rights sooner too ;)
Mirage chapter 379 . 11/18/2019
Wow that was interesting this two working there power together
And what a cleaning she did with his power as boost and executer of those who are bad to the core ...hope they got this crazy emperor too
Mirage chapter 376 . 11/18/2019
One thing they did not thint through fully...not to attack front line and then take there hope. ...yes they can still do this... put attack at four sides and taking put at first the gill top with the "leader" and a goal giver is the first thing they should do...they always did hide behind there lines but the soldier did follow there signs and calls... so no command nothing to follow and keep rule and order...so army is Rady for the picking ...and after the so called Leder and commands are fine they put down the monks and mikos and some go and pit down the emperor in his city in front of all to show that he is no God not protected by God's. ...just a power hungry human who has no respect for his minions.

And with all this they can destroy the army all who do not submit in all ways and accept there punishment and build up the towns and city's and fields they did destroy.
Mirage chapter 315 . 11/17/2019
In Ch 315... I so did hope Kanone would show this old bitch of sesshomarus grandmother her place and slap her a good one... but to force her into absolute helpless submission with only her any power in defence of an old comrade and defender is also real nice - and i like this new miroku. ..a peacock really sweets him and that he is top to the old botch too...not like she did want he following her command and be slave...he is free
kouga's older woman chapter 394 . 8/19/2019
Thank you for sharing
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