Great story! It's been a while since you're last update, have this been discontinue? I hope not! I wish you'll continue this and complete it!

Kaaaay, just...

BUMP.

Like, I love this. ._. I want more pleaaaaaaaaase.

Make more! I think it would be cool if hawke was with Fenris and she met that guy that was with her on that ship!... :)

This story is great! Everyone is totally in character, and I love your Hawke! Please update!

*lol* I'll bet Varric regrets not going. :D Teaching the Dalish Wicked Grace...or was it Diamond Back? I forget. Definitely a corrupting influence :P It'll be interesting enough to see how Merrill and Fenris react to eachother. Better yet, how he reacts to the Dalish in the camp :D

might wanna change your character tags for the story...also since she is carrying Flemeth, it does bring up the creepy factor she is now a sentient amulet, that gives people ear piercing headaches if they put her down...like a magical toddler.

Been a while since I reviewed. Life gets in the way :)

I am, however, now officially caught up! Halelujia!

I'm really enjoying Carver, and Anders seems to be slightly less of a twit that usual (thank goodness).

Loving Varric, of course, and Isabella! Woo! Izzy! Pirate Hi-Five!

Thanks for lots of fun! Keep up the good work!

-AndAgain

I think it's spelled "Danarius" and one other typo was "new" instead of 'knew.' Otherwise, great as always. I'm wondering if you plan on skipping more of the regular time line that isn't as relevant to the years in between.

Blood loss, sure, that's it. A reasonable enough excuse. All right, now you have everyone. Time to move on to the bits between the quests.

I liked the part where she didn't realize breaking a nose in a certain way might kill someone. It goes with her character perfectly. It seems like a slight difference, as you write well, but each chapter seems better than the last. I hope life begins to go better for you as well. Be well!

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I just got my internet back and saw the story was updated and you used my quote like three chapters ago. I cannot tell you how honored I am so I will just keyboard mash. Please excuse my excitement

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I like how you move the story along without skipping around, but also not dragging it out. Someone who hasn't played the game should still be able to follow the story. Very nice. (I'm one who gets impatient with too much retelling of the main story. hehe)

I really love the idea behind your story!

To reply to reviews: There's a reply link in the email you get when one of your stories is reviewed. Or you could just click the name of the person who reviewed, and PM them.

:D

As for suggestions:

I have many.

For one thing, I'd love another dream with the wolf~ I'm dying to know why Fenris is appearing to her! And, is it Fenris?

Whaaaaat iiiisssss iiiiit? D:

Aaaand, maybe we could have a bit about Carver getting a girlfriend? :P

Or Hawke and Varric concoct a crazy story about her exploits in order to drum up business!

So many possibilites~

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-AndAgain

Great story so far! Can't wait until we get to meet Fenris!

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Looks like Hawke found a Varric.