this is so adorable im defeated

I loved this a lot it has so much feeling to it in such small context, but I couldn't help but think of the reaction we would get if anyone walked in on them in the morning. X3 I know I'm cruel.

The feels of this story...
It was just wonderful.

Oh my goodness I loved this. I love the forbidden, quiet, dark undertones that lie in this pairing possibility. Lol. It was very beautiful. :)

This was beautiful. Great job!

This is so beautiful, I love it. But it is at the same time sad, how dumb I feel that I have just realized that this pairing is actually forbidden! Poor Break… poor Sharon… I really wish Jun Mochizuki would make them as couples in the end, instead of only brothers-and-sisters-like…

Nice work, I would so love to read another BreakxSharon fanfics from you. And I can’t believe this is the first fic you’ve ever written in ffn!

How... Bittersweet.

That's just...It's so...I'm speechless, it's beautiful.

So in character, yet interesting in the fact that it focuses more on a side of Break that isn't shown as often, but is most certainly there. Longing, melancholy, guilt, it's so beautifully sad. And romantic, too. You pulled it all together with your beautiful writing flawlessly.

You write the two of them so wonderfully. I really do hope that you'll write more.

I loved this!

I liked this a lot. It was very sweet. :)