Please update!

Great chapter! The grammar was a bit off though...you should totally get a Beta reader. Good chapter anyway though. :D

You know, it's crazy, but the other day the plot bunnies started nagging me to write a story very similar to this (Don't worry though, I have to many un completed stories to work on) and then I find this one! Great job!

PLEASE continue this!

Cool. Cant wait to see whats next

nice chapter. similar to the movie, but still good. that part where they did rock, paper, scissors to decide whose hair to throw down was funny.

that scene where Flynn tips off the guards is stupid, but funny.

I forgot to mention, it was a nice touch to include Flynn/Eugene (or rather, his mother), in the plot in the beginning.

This was a nice chapter, and amusing to read.

I liked the movie, and this is an interesting adaptation.

Here are some nicknames for you. moonbeam, ivory, moony,

I'd delete this AN though :P

I like the little lyrics you put at the end! Those were yours, weren't they?

Anyway, great chapter so far... you did get a little heavy on the commas at points, but other than that it was excellent. Great job! :D

While I'm not enthusiastic about your late update, I approve of the Doctor I am seeing ;)

i love this story so far plz keep it going and don't forget Flynn and Rapunzel have to stay together but i have a feeling ur going to put hazel with dan :) i like that idea :D 3

I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE CONTINUE! :)