Beautiful. I don't know how else to describe it. Each quote from the show was perfectly picked. You are brilliant! I seriously loved this story!

Beautifully written. The excerpts you've selected show a steady destined march toward utter dissolution. There are only two problems: (1) Team Free Will doesn't believe in steady destined marches; and (2) I DON'T WANT IT TO BE LIKE THIS!

Excuse me. I know it IS like this, and I'm trying to brace myself for how the show is going to have it end, but for them to create such a lovely character and then do what I fear they're going to do is just heartbreaking.

And your story sums up that heartbreak perfectly.