| Reviews for Diego's Nightmare |
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paranormal mystery chapter 2 . 5/27/2013 chapter 1 is the EXACT same as chapter 2! |
Palimpest chapter 2 . 5/25/2013 The imagery was clear, but some of the characters seem ooc. I could understand perhaps the possum brothers would see what's happening and in their non-chalant way think "what is wrong with this guy", and maybe Manny wouldn't understand because he's generally dense. But Ellie has shown herself, often, that she is very caring and motherly, and would try to help- awakening Diego or soothing him. Sid is by nature empathic, and certainly caring as well, or at least knows about Diego's phobia, and would react accordingly. Even Manny, who I mentioned as generally dense, has past experiences enough to have had his fair share of nightmares and could at least put two and two together. |
jess chapter 2 . 10/18/2012 wow this was such a great story and i enjoyed reading it though i do feel sorry for diego. pls make a sequel for it it would be awesome if you did cuz your a really great writer. haha wet dream that made me laugh and thanks for not being dead ive been waiting so long for you to write something but it was worth the wait;p aslo pls make a character conversation for diego and shira since they are the BEST thankyou heaps for the story :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2012 Cool repost! So, is the very last thing at the end supposed to be the puzzle? |
saberclaw55 chapter 1 . 8/11/2012 That was so awsome and very detailed loved it |
No Longer Active Here chapter 1 . 1/25/2012 Ha! I loved this! Poor Diego having a nightmare about water. My favourite lines: [He didn't want anyone else thinking he was a wuss.] ["Uh... I just had a nightmare where I... uh... got... crushed... by a big... tree.] Those two had me almost in hysterics, especially the tree comment. Great writing :D ~Aquila |
Anthony W chapter 1 . 12/19/2011 Awkward silence |
DEACTIVATED ACCOUNT-Buckrocks chapter 1 . 12/15/2011 LOL! This made me laugh! This fanfic, my friend, is going on my favorites list RIGHT NOW! :D |
cake chapter 1 . 8/7/2011 hahaha! Awkward silence. |
Zinka17 chapter 1 . 7/21/2011 Haha that was funny! I was picturing him talking and moving in his sleep. It reminds me of this funny video on youtube where this sleeping dog kicks around frantically and then runs into the wall. :D |
AwesomeA chapter 1 . 7/14/2011 LOL can imagine Diego stating that a tree fell on him and Manny and Ellie just going "Yeah of course...*weirdo*" |
goldenpuon chapter 1 . 6/28/2011 Very well done detail wise and for writing in-character. I can imagine not all of Diego's fear would have been gone after just one time swimming in Ice Age 2 so it makes sense he might have a nightmare about it. I'm not sure if it's just mean but I found the mental image I had while reading this of Manny and Ellie awkwardly staring at Diego clawing and kicking very funny. My favorite quiote from when everyone woke up and Diego and teh rest of the herd were staring at each other was, "Everything was quiet; not even the crickets were chirping." LOL This line was very humorous and also very well-emphasizes the point of how awkward the situation was. I was a little surprised the herd (particularly Sid and the possums) didn't tease or further question Diego about the dream. Very good one-shot. the parts with Diego reciting Sid's lesson in his sleep and shouting "Nooo!" had me laughing! |
Mad-Face Pro c.c chapter 1 . 6/28/2011 Ha,ha XD This is funny, I wonder if Diego will still have his 'water' nightmare again. Good job - PaoloKid14 |
KaylaDestroyer chapter 1 . 6/28/2011 Love it! So funny! Can you do more? Please? |