"She was so beautiful, so smart… he could never measure up to such a butterfly. But he chased her anyway, and one day, maybe, he would catch her…."

That's the sweetest thing ever! Good job writing it! :)

~Analie~

i love the metaphor of the caterpillar that you've used for hermione

it fits her perfectly

oh ron, you'll get her oneday!

Aw, there were truly so many things I loved about this piece. The characterization, the language, and the humor... ah, brilliant. I loved most how you conveyed the romance and perfection of Ron and Hermione's relationship. Not that they're perfect people, of course, but that they truly are meant for one another. And, of course, maybe it took a little growing up for both of them to realize that, but you depicted that rather well, too. You've done a wonderful job in making me smile throughout this whole fic- and that's wonderful, because I really did need a 'pick-me-up' today. ;)

Anyways, if you have time, I'd love for you to check out some of the one-shots I've written on my profile. I've got only a handful so far, but I'm working on more at the moment, as well. I'd love to hear your opinion! Thanks so much and, really, great job! -Vonne

Beautifully written. I enjoyed it.

Amazing!:) I truly enjoyed this fanfic! You have an intelligent style of writing.