I liked how even though Remus knew - and Sirius knew that Remus knew - Sirius was still trying to hide it from him. I also liked that Remus was the only one he went to, because whilst I think that James and Peter could probably helped him, too, it's not always easy to have so many people involved, especially if you don't know what their reactions are going to be. I hope that makes sense :)

This was so sad. Sirius trying to cover up his disorder by blaming it on his father was heartbreaking. He didn't trust Moony enough to just come out and say it, or to ask for help. That, and the fact that even at Hogwarts (his home away from home) he was unable to ask for help or feel any better on his own was tragic. I liked how I was able to see into the character's thoughts like I did and I appreciated that Sirius allowed Moony to help him in the end :)
Fantastic story!

And since when is Remus a poet?

Poor Sirius. Maybe now that he realizes how much his friends really do care for him he might be on the road to recovery. Then again, that road isn't always easy at all. It's funny at the end how Sirius just follows his friend's instruction even when he thinks Remus is a little bit idiotic for using such metaphors. Bitterly cute little fic between Sirius and Remus during their childhoods.

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This is really good and I think you really managed to write in Sirius' self harm issues well, which is a difficult subject at best! Are you going to continue with this? I hope you do, it's really good!

Hey, and welcome to your first official Fanfictio Idol review :)

So, this was pretty enjoyable, for a story like it :D I think it was well written and all.

First, grammar and spelling. I didn't find much wrong in the way of that, though what was up with g-d-awful? :/ If you're going to write it, please spell it out :D Other than that, it was pretty great in the ways of grammar and the like. ;) I enjoyed it!

Your plot, with believability, seemed a little off. I couldn't really understand why Sirius did what he did. I could see it happening, yet I couldn't, you know?

It seems pretty original, as I haven't seen the idea much before, but it did seem like it'd been done before :) I liked the idea behind it though, because i could relate to it :)

Overall, this was a pretty good fic, so nice job ;D

I usually back away - far away - from any story about eating disorders, cutting, or suicide, but I decided to give this a try. I liked it. :) You did a great job capturing Remus's helplessness, watchful confusion, and determination to help. Nice job.

Very interesting start. :) I'm a bit of a sucker for angst and drama in fanfiction, so you had me hooked from the beginning, to be honest. Anyway, I love the tight-knit relationship you have between the Mauraders. It's very canon and wonderful to read. ;)

Anyways, if you have time, I'd love for you to check out some of the one-shots I've written on my profile. I've got only a handful so far, but I'm working on more at the moment, as well. I'd love to hear your opinion! Thanks so much and, really, great job! -Vonne

Very well written. Bit sad, but then, that's the point. Well done.

It's a good story. Nice idea, and I like Sirius in it.