i thought he was gonna say, "come back safely

Sweet...so Dan is also part of phantom planet...does this change the ending a bit or does it just stay the same?

I am going to guess clockwork was going to say "be careful"
I hope there'll be another chapter up...

Huuu very interesting fic you started here!
Please continue I'd love to know what happen next and it would be really sad dhould this story get forgotten :(

LG Reika

Please keep going! XD

Ya gonna continue?

Cool

He was obviously going to say 'Be careful'. And please update! I don't know why but I've been going through a Danny Phantom phase these past few months...

i like this, i like this a lot.

Are you still writing this? because it's really good, and i wouldnt mind reading the rest of it. Oh, and he was probably going to say ''be carefull''

Okay, I must say: This has got to be the best story I've read in a long time. And, to answer your question, I think he was going to say: "Be careful."

Aww so sweet! Clockwork was going to say "Be careful" GAHH! stupid Internet! It makes me ship EVERYTHING!

Man, get to the Clockwork and Dan lovey-doveyness.

lol

Hey there!

So you decided to keep your story here. I prefer DA but is ok, your fic is worth to read in any place :)

In DA you comment that you were unsure of having Clockwork and Dan out of character; I believe you're giving their relationship a very good character. Most of authors have Dan regretting eventually of his actions and even if you have that intention -wich I don't really know- is refreshing to see you don't start with that. I love how this two interact, I feel it like a cat -Clockwork- playing with the mouse -Dan- and being Dan the kind of mouse he is, well, is reaaaally enjoyable :3 So congratulations for your writting.

By the way, I need to ask if you'll pair Dan and Clockwork... I ask because English is not my mathernal lenguaje so some things are, sometimes when reading, confusing for me, and this is one of them, sorry. I want to make sure of that.

I have more comments but those have to be said in the next chapters. Oh and I think you did great editing the chapters, they're the same in esence but well complemented with the editting.

Your point of view of Dan in the last episode is funny, espacialy a the encounter with Paulina.

I would love to see Dan in diguise more ofen.

Nice et attractive, hope to read soon next chapy

bye

Sounds very promising! Don't let your esteem die!