I think you did a good job. ;3

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Yay Meabun! And if Gui really didn't figure out that Lan is Prince from her very obvious essay, I have no idea what would (except for someone telling him, of course) XD

MEATBUN! v and i like this story hope you write more also although i am just joining i'll have some stories up soon hope you check them out! ( ps- i will remember to post a story of prince x gui fluff ;} )

I need more to read! NOW!

LOVE IT! I can't believe how good it was! LIke THE best story ever! I would tell you to write another chapter, but i don't particularly want you to, considering how well it ended... There weren't that many gramar mistakes, the beginning was hot and surprising, immediately catching the readers attention. It was alluring and ended quickly and smoothly in a flowing sequence that didn't seem too sudden nor too time consuming either. I'm happy that it wasn't too physical yet somehow clearly expressing the love they both shared for each other. Good idea on the revelation scheme. The poem and everything was a bit vague but the way you put it didn't let off that impression. I mean, it was all so heart pounding, completely the confrontation i was looking for! The ending was overall very cute, i love the way you added Lollydragon into it then cutting it off to real life. But i must admit that i was a bit confused in the end, isn't there some kind of rule prohibiting student teacher relationships? It didn't make sense that he risked it all at the end of class. Although it is quite poetic, like, i'd risk everything for you sorta thing that gives you hearts for eyes and makes your heart start pounding, lovey dovey mindset and all. So i must congratulate and praise you for your hard work and tell you that it was amazingly done, couldn't have thought of a better way to put it, meeting all of my expectations and satisfying me every bit! Lolz :D

Great! The play on mulan's name has spectacular

More. More. More. I want MORE of this! It never seems to last, those great kissing moments between Gui and Prince! I absolutely loved the story!

I would have loved more -blush- intense moments... Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa!~

That was cute!

One word "AMAZING"! I have read alot of fanfiction on 1/2 Prince and this is the best by far!

Wahh! So cute! Awesome great job! xD

I was just going to lurk and grin as per usual but you sank so low as to offer up meatbun. for shame XD. Anyway, I love your stories almost as much as I love the manhua, keep writing!

The end was.. A little weird, but it was good(;

I love the poem part about huamulan; it fits perfectly! :D

Good Job!

Oh noes! Not the meat bun attack! D:

Busted~!

I love Lolidragon's part the most. :D