Please if you think about it could you update the story I really want snow happens next so please think about it thank you

I like this so far, but I'm slightly confused as to what's going on...

now that tut fell in love with cleo on the past now he'll be more in love with her when she gets back

FINALLY YOU'RE FUCKING BACK AND YOURE WELCOME

Good so far, however there ARE some grammatical or spelling mistakes. Mostly, at the bottom of this chapter it's " torture ", and " through " instead of " torchor " and " threw "

please tell me the update will be sooooooonnnnnnnnn.
also his sister man,his sister i mean going against a priest back then could get you in trouble not only with the people but also the god i mean i would think she would be worried about that part too. well as always a beautiful chapter
until next time

lovely your
chocolate E

uh oh

Its about time..cant wait till next chapter

Your an amazing writer and very unique, I'm very inpresssed with your story thus far and I hate to bring myself to this level, but ...IM IN LOVE WITH YOUR STORY ! IM BEGGING MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE IM DYING ON THE INSIDE ! ahemm
(clears my throat )
And with that said I once more implore you to continue this marvel of a story you bring happyness to us fanfic readers. You have a gift from the gods. You can write others of us can not

I am so so so so soooooooo sorry i haven't reviewed things were hectic and you have no idea how happy i am to log and see this, no idea.

"Just because you haven't had any . . . fine piece of hunk flirt" okay i thought you were going in completely different direction with that.
i feel kinda sorry for Akner because honestly she just wants to do her duties as a big sister - in a weird way but you know back then. you haven't lost your touch at all and I'm already awaiting the next chapter, until then

lovely yours
chocolate E

PLEASE UPDATE I HAVE REVIEWED AND FAVORITE AND FOLLOWED PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE

PLease update this i ask of you please update this

I remember this show from when I was younger, I don't even think its on Tv anymore. I feel really old now.

Please, please, please update soon! this story is really good!

make more i beg of you if you even bother looking i love this story