Just gonna do this by commenting on each section, because it's a bit too long to do a line/by/line :)

I) This one was beautiful, so pretty, but so sad! I loved it. Poor Luna. And I loved how she was coloring a storm. It was a really good touch.

II) This was just cute! I liked the part about the Nargles. It's just like aww, little Luna and Neville /3 So sweet.

III) I love how Luna talks to Moaning Myrtle. In my head I have a whole thing about how she just goes in there and cheers her up all the time, and this complied with that fantasy and made me very cheerful indeed. And oh my goodness! Draco Malfoy! And I'm just seeing Tom Felton all panicked and disheveled and alas, it doth make me happy -grins- And she kisses him! :-o

IV) That just made me grin so hard. I love Luna, she's so sweet and light and caring and PERFECT, and you've made her out to be exactly like she's supposed to be. "And they do" - genius! GENIUS.

V) Ohhhh, she gets her happy ending! :D This was so lovely!

All five of your stories were utterly glorious. Congratulations [a year late..still so sorry about that :P] about winning the challenge! You're a very brilliant writer &hearts

omg this story is legit perfection, i honestly cannot. the way you wrote luna's character was real and honest and totally IC. i loved it, bby!

This is legit the best story you've ever written.

Blue, this was awesome. So beautiful, I absolutely adored it; all of it!

The Draco part, or the Neville part, or the first part, or... Gah. All were my favourite parts.

Loved it &hearts

D'awww. This was really cute. (And I guess the mother one was kind of depressing, but I'm focused on the cuteness.) It as really great. Love, love, love!

Awww... :)

Love, love, love it!

~Emily

Thanks for entering the competition! I wish you the best of luck!

Luna is one of my favorite characters and I think you portrayed her very well. Especially with the whole Nargles comment. Cute.

Keep writing! :D

Hey, Bluey dear, and welcome to your first official Fanfiction Idol review )

I honestly found this to be lovely and perfect and everything :)

Grammar&spelling- they honestly weren't perfect.

'her mother pour (should be pore) over an old spellbook', Longbottom, not Longbottem, just a few little things like that. Otherwise, it was pretty good.

For originality, it was pretty original, actually! :) I loved the Draco kiss- so unexpected and yet so lovely. ;) I loved how you showed each of the kisses in a different light, romantic or not romantic, and the last kiss was just adorable :)

It was pretty believable to me- Luna was in character and all! I didn't really get the motives behind the kiss with Draco, but otherwise, I could actually see all of the other kisses happening.

Overall, this was a lovely fic and a great portrayal of Luna! I love you and great job on this one, I honestly think it was one of your best and it really did make its point. Thanks for submitting it! :) ~ Mad

The last sentence was amazing. I especially loved the first and the last one. /So/ sweet!

So, so favourited.

xx Avril

I LOVE IT SO MUCH IT HURTS A LITTLE BIT.

That was fantastic. I just... ohhhhhhh. So sweet! Your short but vivid descriptions were bang on and even in so few words you managed to get Luna's character exactly.

And Draco's. And Harry's.

Draco! I loved that bit! I'd never even considered it, never even imagined, but I loved it! Unexpected, too, which is always a bonus.

I also like the way they're not all romantic - some are just friendly, like Draco and Harry. I can actually see her doing all this.

I hope I'm getting my point across.

You broke my heart at the start, but had it mended by the end. Thankyou for this wonderful piece.

Good luck in the competition! x

Very sweet! I liked this a lot. I'm a Druna lover, so I especially like the idea of Luna offering Draco a tiny moment of comfort during one of his worst years and the thought of them still speaking years later...even after she was imprisoned in his cellar.

One of the most wonderful things about Luna is the way she treasures her relationships. You really captured that here.

Oh wow, this is better than I expected :B

Darling, only you could pull off something like this.

I adore the final line in Mum-Luna: "Only seven minutes later, her mother is killed." It's abrupt and shocking, because even though you know it's coming, the words before that are so prettily worded that you almost forget.

Ah! NevilleLuna! This has to be my second (and last) favourite Luna ship. It's so very them )

DracoLuna - this is very realistic, love, and very true to their characters. People often make them OOC when pairing them together, but you make it (them) work.

HarryLuna - I loveloveadore their friendship in the books, and I adore them here. You've expanded on their friendship, which I really wish we saw more of in the books, all while keeping them IC.

RolfLuna - my absolute favourite RolfLuna ship (canon!). I also adore how you've left most of his character up to the readers imagination. Plus, I love wedding scenes!

Great job, darling!

Mum-Luna: Eepp, this was really sad. I was shivering BLue. '(

Neville-Luna: SWEEEEEEEEEEET. D oh my gosh, I love them. /resisting the urge to ship them. ;)

Draco-Luna: AWwwwwwwwwwwww, it's so Luna, really, haha. I love it! )

Harry-Luna: Yup, they are always bestfriends. I couldn't ship them. ;)

ROLF-LUNA: I lovelovelove it. I ship them, but I haven't read many stories about them. D

Great job, Blue! I love it. Keep writing. &hearts