Read the prequel and immediately jumped to this sequel. Oh man, I gotta say I was not disappointed. What an emotional rollercoaster this has been. I love how you displayed each character and I especially loved how you interpreted each relationship and how it progresses as well as interacts with each other. The greens will always be a personal favorite of mine but the way you wrote the blues and reds character development was great. I will admit the time they were sick and their last moments brought tears to my eyes. Definitely one of my favorite reads.

Uhhh was that Mojo...?

Thank you thank you so so much for this story. I love this 3

I am at lost of words of how you made such a beautiful wonder fictional characters on a CN show come alive in what’s seems to be reality in your story. I would love for this to be a book or someone to showcase your talent and it’s so hard to explain the emotions I went threw with this story. I was crying and I was relieve and slightly mad but most of all smiling at all of this. I don’t know how you did it but you captured the characters so perfectly that I can’t even explain how I’m thankful about your stories you tell. This is by far the most amazing fanfic I’ve ever read. Others there would be something I didn’t like, but your fanfic was imperfectly perfect. I am surprised how low your review count is, but all in all you would make a honorably book writer. I hope you have an amazing day. :

A little more than 6 years ago when I left my review for HTCM, this story had not been published. Years passed, and I remembered reading HTCM, and vaguely remembered that there was supposed to be a sequel. So imagine my surprise and excitement last year when I stumbled upon ‘Losing Control,’ and sure enough, it is the sequel (or companion) to what I think is still one of the best PPG (x RRB) fics on the site.

That said… Wow. I really don’t have any words to describe how amazing this was. Not only was it so much darker, but it was very deep too – the subjects of life and death, one’s purpose in life, as well as the love and devotion portrayed between our favorite couples… Wow. I found myself laughing, crying, and sometimes just needing to take a break from reading because it was so emotional and heart wrenching.

Loved everyone’s characterization. I must say, the bit with Him was very surprising, but at the same time, I understood his motives for helping. I actually felt a bit sorry for Mojo (and Princess). The memory loss was done well – not too cliché, but predictable enough that one could sense that the girls would have remembered the boys in the end.

Honestly, there’s so much more that I could comment on this gem, but in the end, I just want to say a big “Thank you” for writing this (as well as HTCM). They were a joy to read, and while a part of me is sad that we will no longer be able to experience what their future might hold, a part of me is glad you ended it here. )

So thank you for the adventure, and I wish you luck in all your writing endeavors!

loved this story from start to finished

Wow... There’s no other words for this story except that. I immensely loved this story; it moved me to tears so many times. I felt like I was actually there from how you described everything. You ever considered writing a novel? I think you’d go very far.

Oh my god, I'm totally speechless.
I'm just.. woah, seriously I am wondering how this story, this masterpiece not many reviews or attention. Like, I've been in a roller coaster by reading this story. I nearly teared up as I saw that it ended and I can't get enough of it.
You deserve more attention seriously! I'm just lost of words, I'm sorry. Not even words can describe how beautiful this story is. I'm so glad, so, glad that I've been going through stories and found yours.
Aaaahh, I'm happy to see that those babies are fine and hearthy and happy ;w;

Have a good day and never stop writing, it would be such a loss
-Ti

It's quite late to say this cuz I finished reading this a few months ago but God! i dnt wanna think of me not finding and reading this story! thank u for sharing your stories TTvTT *happy tears
I think im gonna reread this again soon~~

This is a beautiful story... its so action packed full of emotion and the way they got their memorys back was a great scene.

Definitely a story I'll come back to and read again sometime!

I started reading Hard to Control Myself when i was 10 (yeah that kid i know) because i loved it. I guess you could say i grew up as the story continued. That's one of the reasons i love it. Not only is it a great story wich depicts these characters better than any other one i've read, i grew up while they were growing too. This story is very different than HTCM and it becomes more and more evident the more you read. My life changed drastically while theres was too. This is a pretty personal thing to put in the review section, I know, but I felt I had to thank you for writing such a amazing stories. Both HTCM and LC are absolutely perfect in every way and I will miss the excitment of finding time to read the newest chapter and being impressed and inspired by you're deatil and storytelling ability. You are an amazing writer who I strive to be as good as. I saw your writing stytle change over these years and all I can say is that you have proved once again that you will always find a way to become an even better writer and exceed perfection. I thank you for this wonderful story. -just another fan

This is the best fanfic I have read on this site so far and make a sequel please!

Absolutely loved the whole story!

Oh god... oh god where do I even start!? I don't know where to start- I laughed! I cried! ( okay mostly cried ) and I fangirled and just... wow. Wow what a ride. What a journey - through both works- and just... Bravo.

Bravo. Amazing. Take a bow. Do an elegant curtsy! High five whatever but you have earned them ALL! This piece was outstanding- absolutely outstanding- the emotions, the romance ( The Reds simply broke me at times- Brick swearing to be last and more or less keeping that promise just... I died) the fact that blossom remembers him reading those words- just I suppose rambling aside you can probably ascertain I adored the Reds here- this right here is one of the best Red fics out there- bar none: Just I'm in awe to tell you the truth.

I'm also a creep who checked and listened to all of your playlist for this entire piece as I read it- ( ... I also borrowed from it a few times in my own writing won't lie ;; ) and just everything felt like I was watching and experiencing a movie- a television show just it was... phenomenal.

This is one hundred percent now on my top ten ppg list- arguably top five- you should be extraordinarily proud of what you've accomplished here because bar none it was outstanding. If ( when) you get published- PLEASE let us know because I for one will be one of the first in line I can guarantee that- you have a gift- a fabulous one and it's going to take you far- I'm sorry this isn't very specific but to be blunt... I can't pick just one single scene in these last chapters to center on- because as a whole the whole piece was pristine- solid and just fabulous.

As I said take a bow - you've more than earned it.

Best of luck on ALL of your writing adventures! And again - Congratulations.

Cheers,
Carrie

Thank you so much for making a masterpiece! I was enriched by the story and the emotional roller coaster, you gave us! This will definitely be read over and over again as time goes on, it was a gem to read and it was enthralling! Please continue to post more stories and maybe even sequels and spin-offs! Keep being amazing and an excellent writer