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KhaalidaNyx chapter 5 . 2/27/2013 :D |
Unkown Stranger chapter 5 . 12/11/2012 Cliffhanger ! AHHHHH ! update 1/1?! |
yooniessi chapter 5 . 12/21/2011 Loving this, hope you update soon :D |
pisceanchic101 chapter 4 . 7/22/2011 Oh snaps! BB knows! I'm really liking how you're ending your chapters. Also, I liked many things about this chapter: Filipino (pinoy power!) reference, Alfred and Robin scene (beautiful and believable depiction of events and emotions), and Starfire and Robin's interaction and the slightly chilly note it must have left Starfire feeling. Also, there's more humor in this chapter as well; I like it. Keep up the good work, and can't wait to read the next chapter! :D |
pisceanchic101 chapter 3 . 7/22/2011 Great chapter so far. Exciting and funny way to end the chapter on such a hilarious and suddenly abrupt note as well. |
pisceanchic101 chapter 2 . 7/22/2011 Slade! Oh no! It just got more interesting. ;) |
pisceanchic101 chapter 1 . 7/22/2011 Aiyah! This is really great so far. Exciting and awesome cliff-hanger as well excellent character depictions. The only suggestion is to describe weather. Yes, weather. Raven's sweater just seems to contradict with the sunny atmosphere that Jump city usually depicts in teen titans. say it's winter or something cold. |
Quoththeraven1103 chapter 5 . 7/15/2011 Fantastic chapter! Must say I'm not to much a fan of the mushy-y BB stuff at the beginning but c'est la vie! The Slade action part and fluffy at the end more than made up for it though! Hmmmm now the question is, how will Robin react? Btw I'm giving YOU a cookie for Raven's spiel about Starfire, it's about time SOMEONE said something about the way EVERYONE frets over her! God it pisses me off so bad! Well either way please please please please update soon! I hate waitng! |
Jinx chapter 5 . 7/15/2011 Nice history so far. But how everybody, especially BB and Robin, will react when they find out Raven was with Slade? She always condemned Terra for joining him. Just one thing, in the end of this chapter, Alfreds name was wrong. |
GaaraHinataWake chapter 5 . 7/14/2011 Great chapter, it just makes you wonder if she is going to go back to Slade or not, either way this story is awesome. :D |
Babbs101 chapter 5 . 7/14/2011 It's AWESOMETASTICLY AMAZIN |
black rose-raven angel chapter 5 . 7/14/2011 Is she back for good? That is the question that haunts me. Kid Wykkyd rocks! Update soon! |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/8/2011 I don't want to sound demanding but PLEASE make Raven so strong that she can single handly defeat the Titans and under Slade's trainig no longer needs to say "Azarath Metron Zinthos" -Love rAVEN4EVER |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/7/2011 Don't let her get caught PLEASE and please make her stay with Slade! |
ebo579 chapter 4 . 7/6/2011 Oh man, I wonder how he knew! And I wonder how she's going to react! Please update soon :) |