Hi! Even though it's been years since you updated, in case you still want feedback lol... I like your story and how it's told from someone else's point of view. Your writing flows well and you don't have a problem with over-doing bad humor like a lot of MWPP fics do. However, it is a bit hard to like Rosalie a lot of the time. She's just really disagreeable haha. But at least you're true to her character!

Well, good job anyhow. Thanks for the read.

What's your definiton of soon? For goodness sakes, you have SO SO SO SO many positive reviews. There are so many people out here dying for you to update? Please, please, please, update. It's been A YEAR AND A HALF!

Please, do you know how many people's days you would make if you updated this story? Please. You have an original plot idea here, written in entertaining and enjoyable prose. Your sense of humor is fantastic. Don't stop this story. As your loyal reviewers, can you imagine forcing us to go on with life and not knowing what happens to Lily and James, or if Rosalind and Sirius ever get together? Please, so mercy. You leave a cliff hanger for a year and a half? That's not mean, that's cruel and inhumane.

So please, update this story. Smiles, Taika

"The really long dinner conversation will be continued soon, I promise." Well, at the moment I only see fit to call you a liar. :-(

It's been over a year since you've updated. This story is fantastic, and I would hate to have you discontinue it. Please don't do that to us- all the people who've so paciently been waiting! SalviLyon

I really like this story so update soon please!

~Anna

Man, this is great! I started out thinking it would be Mary Sue-o-rama, and fully prepared to mock, but this is smart! And funny!

Things I loved:

* You capitalized "Bedlam!" Right there, that's a major indicator that you know what your doing. The detail, that's good.

* The little nods to Marauder stuff: how James must have had a map to the school, why did Remus know Sirius was in the girls' dorm, and other things like that. They weren't too big of a deal, which was fantastic! Subtlety. That was great.

* Veronica, and her horribly annoying "cutesy" act. I know girls like that! Very true to life, good job - the sort of coquettish, baby-talking kitten act that some guys buy, most mostly is just. so. annoying. Good Lord, I wanted to slap her. So, well done on your part.

I don't know if you plan on continuing this, because you haven't updated in a while, but I just wanted to thank you for giving me a nice surprise with a smart, well-done fic.

Please update! This is one of my favorite stories, and it has been so long since you updated. I love this. A.A.

I like this story - keep it up.

I also love the personality you have put into it.

One suggestion: many times, I would have hit someone in the story. What about that chapter when someone says something about lily (I forgot what it was) I never felt like hitting a written charactor more.

At first I wasn't sure what to think of Rosalind, I thought she was too 'goody-goody'I thought she was going going to end up a mary-sue... But you seem to have really fleshed Rosalind out and given her interesting flaws her combination of being uptight and wanting to play by the rules (wanting to go the ball with Donald because of his principles and not because she actually actracted to him) but being secrectly amused at the Marauders has really grown on me.I'm also really enjoying your characteristion of the marauders (especially Sirius and Peter) at it doesn't seen forced or out of canon. I hope you continue with this fic.

Brilliant!

Gee, can she get anymore bitter?

Hi!
I've been following your story for ages and it's one of my favorites. (You know, the ones that you check to see if they've been updated every time you go online. That kind.) I usually don't like OC because they're so formula, BUT your story is WAY different. A different point of view, a different plot, and different twists. Plus, I love your sense of humor. (My favorite quote is "Who buys dungbombs wholesale. Who needs to buy dungbombs wholesale?" Pure Brilliance. I love it. It's got to be one of my favorite quotes in all of FanFiction-land.
However, it has been a really long time, and you haven't updated. *tear* I'm getting increasingly depressed when I see every day that you still have only 13 chapters on this story. Make my day. Write chapter 14 soon! I will not beg-... Please! Please, Please PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

PLease continue...its great

Rosalind has improved! She is WAY more like a real person! I am very interested in what happens next, so update!

Congratulations! Rosalind is not a Mary Sue! She is, however, one of the most unlikeable original characters that is not a Mary Sue that I have ever read in any fanfic. I'm not trying to insult your story, but couldn't you make her a little likeable? This is a very good story except for the fact that I can't muster up any sympathy for Rosalind. (A little indignation for the library/stealing incident, but I really don't seem to be able to like her) She's a bit too nasty, even to a boy-crazy girl like Winnie, and she never thinks about things from anyone else's point of view. The only person she likes is Lily, the rest are either ignored, tolerated, or actively disliked.