Wonderful - - cannot wait to read the sequel. Thanks for sharing

Enjoying this story - - thanks for all the chapters

Enjoying this story - - even with the medical issues

I think that whole thing with Joey should have been an entirely different story because I think this story overall is too long and frankly I'm skipping chapters because its a bit too slow or too angsty for my tastes.

Horrible story. I cant believe I've lasted 27 chapters. I've read a lot of your stuff but I'm done with this. Just awful.

Maura doesn't work for Boston Police Department so she is not the Chief of police's medical examiner. Only the Governor appoints the chief medical examiner so he is Maura's boss.

Why didn't Maura talk to her before she fell asleep.

I do not understand why JANE liked JOEY ? He was a bully, at least she dumped him for CASEY.
I thought mothers protected their children, so why does ANGELA try to push them together ?
I think he was on JANE's door step to get one last notch on his BOSTON bedpost before moving to DC.
Thank goodness she said no... I have read on line that some people wanted them together;
I wanted JANE to punch him, A knee to the groin is just as good...

You are slowly tightening the thin wire of stress, fear and angst. Brilliant writing. *thumbs up*

Oh no! I think Hoyt is Jane's second biggest fear, her first being the terror of loosing Maura.

Like I said in my review of chapter 9, Jane is Jane. But I can actually see and sense her growing up a bit while recovering.

Jane is Jane. No getting around that. Always strong. Always stubborn.

I think the waiting is the worst. The nightmare that Maura had was just terrible. I am very glad that Jane is ok.

Shit! The angst levels are skyrocketing. Mine too. Even knowing that Jane survives.

Beautiful! Their confession of loving each other could not have been at a better time or place.