Is bad

so you made a three crossover with dbz and bleach then Naruto...thank you you have made my life meaningful now i can die in peace

Hey author did you know that Frieza is going to be revived in the new dbz movies and he is going to achive a new form and we will finally see Whis fight

Frieza: Hey bitches I'm back !

Goku: Freezer...you've been revived ? No seriously how did you get revived ?

Frieza: That's a long story

flashback
in Hell

Frieza: oh god when I get out of here I'm goona...oh wait...that's right.

meanwhile

Sorbet: I wish for Frieza to be revived !

Shenron: this wish is indeed possible but the one called Frieza has-

Sorbet: JUST DO IT MOTHER-F***** !

Shenron: FINE GEEZ !

Frieza gets revived in a bunch of pieces

Frieza: Who,what,where,why!

Sorbet: The f*** I didn't say to revive him in pieces ass-hole !

Shenron: his your problem now figure it out !

Shenron disspears and the dragon balls scatter

Tagoma: we still have...the pod.

flashback ends

Frieza: so now that I have been revived I will finally exact my revenge on you monkey.

Vegeta: HA jokes on you. Kakarot here-

Frieza: Defeated Majin Buu ?

Vegeta: Defeated...ok when and how ?

flashback
after Frieza heals and breaks the glass

Sorbet: ... so did you know that Goku is stronger than Buu ?

Frieza: huh...is that right ?

Sorbet: yeah also Tagoma's gay.

flashback ends

Frieza: and then I blew a hole in Tagoma's heart.

Vegeta: it doesn't really matter because I have finally reached the legendary super saiyan...for real.

Frieza: well it just so happens that have reached a new level of power.

Frieza transforms into his new golden form

Vegeta: huh...what a rip off.

u did great at some times, then there were times that u just write drivel shit, that's what u wrote shit at times, you're not very inconsistent at times. can u b more b more consistent bitch, cut out all them crap u put in, bitch

*sigh* There's just so much wrong with this story. There are already tons of plot holes and it's only the second chapter. The first is, how did Goku have senzu beans with him? He would have used them to restore his power to kill Buu because he didn't know they would wish his power back. Also, you said that Goju went Super Saiyan, then a paragraph later he said he was in his normal form. I could get over all that though, if you didn't make Aizen stronger than someone who can destroy universes with ease. Sorry friend, but I can't read any further.

Lemon scenes. I wonder if chi chi will be jealous? Lol

Poor goku. Lol. He alwys hated hospitals and needles. Lol.

Love the story. Post a new chapter!

Come on have goku fully recover and kick sasuke a #!

Even if goku is weakened and is in base form he should be more than a match for sasuke. No one in the shinobi/naruto world But the ten tails is not powerful enough to destroy the planet, goku in his base form should be overkill for any reaper or ninja.

Your story sucks ass for two reasons. One, you have awful grammar, try using periods and commas. Two, you nerfed the shit out of goku. I seriously couldn't get past the Aizen fight without disliking this story.

goku solos the hst with no effort none has shown his physical capability and thinks to the new movie goku is now a causal solar system bust with mftl speeds nobody no matter what gay little haxx they have can even hope to beat goku can anybody make a dbz fanfic without nerfing their power

When are you goung to update this fanfic. Why did you nerfed goku so vadly in this story. He can destroy a planet easily in his base form. No one in bleach or naruto can beat him. That is a fact. I still love the story though.

lol wtf this chapter ruined the whole story are you kidding me or something
sasuke wouldn't even be able to touch goku or get near him and goku would rip that little shits head off with just a punch
i don't even understand why people think they can compare characters from other animes with the dragonball characters the saiyans are stronger then some fucking ninjas or shinigamis or pirates i like your story but don't ruin it with shit like sasuke giving goku a hard time or even beating him

when is chapter 6 going to be updated ?