Reviews for Opacity
Arielislove24 chapter 23 . 9/1/2018
I really love this story. I would love to see how this ends. You’ve blended this so perfectly, and I love how you’ve constructed Inuyasha’s and Kagomw’s relationship. Please continue with this! You have a gift, and I truly enjoy your writing.
KatanaPrincess chapter 23 . 6/24/2018
Please please please continue this story. It’s so incredibility well written. It drew me in and I haven’t been able to stop and now I need to know what happens!
Guest chapter 23 . 6/17/2018
PLEASE COME BACK! I need to know how you finish it ️️️
Aldrean Treu Peri chapter 23 . 4/22/2018
Lol, the good cup of coffee and the fine piece of pie from an earlier chapter made me think of Twin Peaks. It was great to see Kirara added to the crew as well! And I'm enjoying seeing characters maintaining their personality while being in modern day situations. Nice to have Sesshomaru and the others solidly on the same page (and helping one another) too. Plus it is nice to have Kagome & Inuyasha have a more rewarding relationship together hope to read more one day!
Aldrean Treu Peri chapter 9 . 4/19/2018
Loving the back stories and the way everything is all tied into this modern era tale :-)
Aldrean Treu Peri chapter 1 . 4/16/2018
Just starting this series today and I am already so into it :-D
Falkreath chapter 23 . 12/5/2017
you know I’ve been reading and re reading this story so many times I can’t even remember how many years it’s been. This fic is my fave inuyasha fic of all time and I’m always gonna come back to it, no matter what. Everything about it is perfect. I’ll never get tired of it. Thank you for writing!
Royal Sisters chapter 23 . 3/7/2017
Kikyo: Fate has been cruel and order unkind
How can I have sent you away?
The blame was my own; the punishment, yours
The harmony's silent today

But into the stillness I'll bring you a song
And I will your company keep
Till your tired eyes and my lullabies
Have carried you softly to sleep

Once did a pony who shone like the sun
Look out on her kingdom and sigh
She smiled and said. "Surely, there is no pony
So lovely and so well beloved as I"

So great was her reign and so brilliant her glory
That long was the shadow she cast
Which fell dark upon the young sister she loved
And grew only darker as days and nights passed

Soon did that pony take notice that others
Did not give her sister her due
And neither had she loved her as she deserved
She watched as her sister's unhappiness grew

But such is the way of the limelight, it sweetly
Takes hold of the mind of its host
And that foolish pony did nothing to stop
The destruction of one who had needed her most

Lullay moon princess, goodnight sister mine
And rest now in moonlight's embrace
Bear up my lullaby, winds of the earth
Through cloud, and through sky, and through space

Carry the peace and the coolness of night
And carry my sorrow in kind
Kagome, you're loved so much more than you know
May troubles be far from your mind
And forgive me for being so blind

The years now before us
Fearful and unknown
I never imagined
I'd face them on my own

May these thousand winters
Swiftly pass, I pray
I love you; I miss you
All these miles away

May all your dreams be sweet tonight
Safe upon your bed of moonlight
And know not of sadness, pain, or care
And when I dream, I'll fly away and meet you there
Sleep...Sleep.. Sleep..

Can Lullaby For A Princess fit Kagome's older stepsister, Kikyo in Black As Night, White As Snow? Yes or no? It's better if Kikyo's mother and Kagome's father were still alive, isn't it?
It's better if Kagome's
Guest chapter 23 . 3/7/2017
Thank you for your other story, Black as Night, White As Snow.
PureKagome chapter 23 . 4/4/2016
I love this story so much! A mix between Supernatural and Inuyasha? What could be better than my two favorite things smashed together perfectly! You should do Inuyasha and Doctor Who next haha
Baymax67 chapter 2 . 3/16/2016
I took the challenge u did leme tell you this it creeped the fuck out of me. So ima gana say this WTAF
Baymax67 chapter 1 . 3/9/2016
I LOVE THIS STORY it's very unique
Deactivated-Account-Inactive chapter 3 . 11/2/2015
Haha! The ending! Btw, you may have done it on purpose but it is younger brother to Mayu, not older. Anyhow, awesome story so far!
Shina0017 chapter 23 . 10/5/2015
I love this story! I hope that you update soon! This is an amazing idea. I love the dynamic between all the characters and how you've integrated them into a world similar to that of Supernatural and kept some of the IY storylines, but still made it your own.
The calling chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
I can't wait to read
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