Reviews for The Logic Game
gothgirl4god chapter 17 . 11/7/2018
I. Loved. This. Story. Every bit of it. I have to wake up in 4 hours, but Im still reviewing this awesome story. First, it was very well written and wonderfully detailed. Also I applaud you for staying very true to the characters personalities and mannerisms. The characters all acted just like themselves. Even the way they reacted to the situations they were put in. I say this because, the last fanfiction I read with the CM crew didn't feel accurate in that regard. I too write stories and fanfiction, though I haven't shared any yet. Lol So as a unprofessional writer, you can trust my review. Awesome plot, and even motives for the UnSubs. Im not the best with bad guy motives. Lol The story was great. Beautiful. Very well done! Every moment made me want more. I really have to sleep, cause I have babysitting early in the morning! BUT IM SO READING THE SEQUEL TOMORROW. Lol keep it up. Also know that you did very well with the case debrief at the beginning. Ive been doing alot of CM fanfiction writing lately and Im not good at that part. Lol. You are very talented!
Firedream chapter 12 . 9/10/2018
Very Interesting. I just can't stop reading.
spxxxxx chapter 18 . 4/25/2018
Amazing story and case. Really interesting without too much torture and much more of intellectual things!
Guest chapter 16 . 7/27/2016
I love how you write Spencer and Derek, and how much they care about each other in a brotherly way
Chanelx chapter 13 . 2/17/2016
Why does nobody ever take precautions? Stab them in the leg when they're out cold, lock the door from the room in which they are or close the hatch. I know it's for the story to continue and make it more suspenseful etc but forreal though. Real life moments...

Loved the chapter though!
Chanelx chapter 2 . 2/17/2016
Wow! I really love it so far! And you could be a profiler because it seemd like it came from one of the episodes! I'm impressed!
Jillian chapter 7 . 1/25/2016
Just wondering, but did you get the name Mayella from To Kill a Mockingbird? I don't know how you would answer this, I just had to ask.
Guest chapter 13 . 8/31/2015
That seemed rushed... Shot the guy and took off... LOL
Guest chapter 8 . 8/31/2015
Omg! You are Evil what a cliffhanger! Thank Goodness there is a next lol
Guest chapter 6 . 8/31/2015
I feel so relived that they have a lead (stressed out over here)
Guest chapter 3 . 8/31/2015
Spot on for J.J. Very in character! I almost want to not write reviews because I want to read!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/31/2015
Omg just getting better and better!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2015
Great so far!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2015
So far your profiling was excellent! Good job on chapter one!
RedWizardFox6 chapter 12 . 8/26/2015
Yes and try to have no more figure nail toppings...those always scare me. Anyway great job so far!
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